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02-17-2007, 01:00 PM
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Join Date: Feb 2007
Location: Serbia
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Mistaken Evil
Will you be my friend?
Friend until the end? If you chose not to be my friend, You're gonna die, die, die in pain!!! Can you think for once!? You'll be what I want! If you are one that walks my path for now you'll run away from death! Kill my tears and rape my sorrow This is now, it's not tomorrow If it's not for real then we should die! Be my evil, as I, forgotten I'm like this 'cause they've mistaken Maybe if you run, we'll get away Will you be my friend? Friend until the end? If you chose to become my friend you're gonna get to breathe again Do you want to live!? What have you to give? If you say you'll be friends with me You're get to see the day! Kill my tears and rape my sorrow This is now, it's not tomorrow If it's not for real then we should die! Be my evil, as I, forgotten I'm like this 'cause they've mistaken Maybe if you run, we'll get away What you want's irrelevant What you'll be is what I want Be my friend and you will breathe be my friend and you won't bleed! Kill my tears and rape my sorrow This is now, it's not tomorrow If it's not for real then we should die! Be my evil, as I, forgotten I'm like this 'cause they've mistaken Maybe if you run, we'll get away
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02-17-2007, 01:19 PM
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Bone Machine
Join Date: Nov 2004
Location: Jesusland
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This is terrible, i've yet to hear a song about killing someone in the coming from the writer sense that is good, this is no exception. Quote:
Kill my tears, rape my sorrow? You need to make the vocabulary less morbid, it doesn't do anything for the piece other then make it dark, and not in a good way. Quote:
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I tried to not be an asshole with this, but this is just terrible. Quit trying so hard to be goth metal or whatever it is you're trying to me. Some of these lines are just...urgh. "Kill my tears and rape my sorrow"? Cmon.
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02-17-2007, 01:44 PM
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Location: Serbia
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Now, this is what I call bad lyrics, but still the song is to be recorded and put on my album because it really tells about the darkest period of my life and I will put every song, that is a part of a story that is im my head, on the album. The irony is that the melody in the song is quite happy and catchy and, without the music and lyrics, it would make a great children song...
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02-17-2007, 01:46 PM
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Everyone Does Everything.
Join Date: Apr 2006
Location: coastal plain North Carolina
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This is laughable. I mean it's really bad.
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02-17-2007, 01:53 PM
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The point was to write a song about suffocating your friends...
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02-17-2007, 02:09 PM
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Bone Machine
Join Date: Nov 2004
Location: Jesusland
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In the darkest period of your life, you were killing people? Get help
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02-17-2007, 02:10 PM
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Location: Serbia
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Have you ever heard of metaphore?
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02-17-2007, 02:12 PM
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Bone Machine
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02-17-2007, 02:15 PM
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Location: Serbia
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My internet connection is slow as hell and I can't allow myself to correct errors.
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02-17-2007, 02:29 PM
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Im Just As Sweet!!!:)
Join Date: Nov 2006
Location: america
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Yah I dont really like the whole be my friend or di thing this is thw worst song Ive heard so far
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