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Old 02-19-2007, 02:09 PM  
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Question Rest In Peace

I couldn't get this tune out of my head for weeks,
so I gave in and just used it. Interpret it as you will.



2/08/2007


[----------Verse 1----------]

You thought you were,
As bright as the sun
As deep as the ocean
Where the river runs
Full with emotion

As big as the earth
As vacant as space
But I’ve never seen someone
Look so afraid

[----------End Verse----------]

[----------Chorus----------]

To die - your’re dead
Caught in the act
Shot through the head
Stabbed in the back

But I’ve never seen someone
Look more alive
Lying face down
In the cold - dark – night

Rest In Peace…
I know you're better off

Rest In Peace…
You weren't that tough at all

[----------End Chorus----------]

[----------Verse 2----------]

You thought you were,
As great as a god
As high as a mountain
Where no roads can run
Because of the ground, and

As strong as a bull
As swift as a snake
But I've never seen someone
Look more afraid

[----------End Verse----------]

[----------Chorus----------]

To die - your’re dead
Caught in a trap
Shot through the chest
Kicked in the ass

But I’ve never seen someone
Look more alive
Lying face down
In the cold - damp - night

Rest In Peace…
I know you're better off

Rest In Peace…
You weren't so tough at all

[----------End Chorus----------]

[----------Outro----------]

You weren’t so tough at all…
But you thought you were, invincible

No, you weren’t so tough at all…
Now you know, you weren’t invincible

--Fade--

Rest In Peace….
I know you’re better off

Rest In Peace….
You weren’t so tough at all

[----------End Outro----------]


Monday, February 19, 2007

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Old 02-20-2007, 01:13 AM  
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it has a very common feel to it by todays music, it aint all that bad but the flow ist the best. overall it aint to bad
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Old 02-20-2007, 04:12 AM  
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so much repetition.
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Painstaking devotion and love
Surrendered to self preservation
From others who care for themselves
A blindness that touches perfection
But hurts just like anything else

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