Northern Soul (title)

ZeppelinAir · 02-20-2007, 02:03 AM

i was bored so i wrote this, not sure if its anygood. it

norther soul

To feel the snow on your skin,
Chills your spine and confuses your mind,
An insane grin develops on your frozen face,
And you begin yelling at the rest of your team,
For lying on the pale white ground,
Never a motion is made among them,
But yet you continue to scream and yell,
Thought its to late they already made it to hell,
Blue from the painful cold and red from your pierced flesh,
Avalanche of terror and blizzard of insanity takes control,
Beat after beat, tick after tick your heart begins to die,
Curse god from your frozen tormented soul,
For allowing this to happen,
But it will never happen again,

The final man to fall on the north’s great cold soul.

either/or · 02-20-2007, 04:11 AM

is this about northern exposure?

**right-track** · 02-20-2007, 12:06 PM

Love the title.

ZeppelinAir · 02-20-2007, 01:01 PM

its basicly about being on a climb, and what someone might go through traped freezing and injure on a remote mountain with every other fellow with you is dead

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02-20-2007, 02:03 AM
ZeppelinAir hahahHAHAHahaha.......ha Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: somewhere in Michigan Posts: 544	Northern Soul i was bored so i wrote this, not sure if its anygood. it norther soul To feel the snow on your skin, Chills your spine and confuses your mind, An insane grin develops on your frozen face, And you begin yelling at the rest of your team, For lying on the pale white ground, Never a motion is made among them, But yet you continue to scream and yell, Thought its to late they already made it to hell, Blue from the painful cold and red from your pierced flesh, Avalanche of terror and blizzard of insanity takes control, Beat after beat, tick after tick your heart begins to die, Curse god from your frozen tormented soul, For allowing this to happen, But it will never happen again, The final man to fall on the north’s great cold soul. __________________ Little Things "Sittin on a Toilet in a house i dont know, looking all around where the toilet paper go. feeling real uneasy, feeling real uncertain, got to wipe my ass again with a plastic shower curtain" Rodney Carrington-Little Things

02-20-2007, 04:11 AM
either/or Don't think twice Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: A basement on the hill Posts: 379	is this about northern exposure? __________________ Painstaking devotion and love Surrendered to self preservation From others who care for themselves A blindness that touches perfection But hurts just like anything else Isolation, isolation, isolation

02-20-2007, 12:06 PM
right-track Avin' It! Join Date: May 2005 Location: THE PEOPLES ЯEPUBLIK ФF MAИCUИIA Posts: 5,055	Love the title. __________________ Choose Liverpool. Choose the dole queue. Choose to scam disability benefit. Choose mind-numbing, grinding efficiency over flair. Choose Torben Piechnik, Istvan Kozma and Paul Stewart. Choose not to win a single league title since the backpass rule was implemented. Choose penalties. Choose car stereos, hubcaps and stanley knives. Choose to trade on your proud sense of tradition and then not lift a finger in protest when two American billionaires who don't even know the name of your club decide to buy it. Choose to win the European Cup whilst only having to play seven matches. Choose to bask in a perpetual, sickening, media love-in. Choose celebrities who ** off out of your city as soon as they have earned the money to do so and then spend the rest of their lives harping on about how wonderful it is. Choose to sing about Munich until confronted with your own tragedy. Choose to end it all in an orgy of self pity, just another excuse to perpetuate the grief culture spawned by your selfish, insular **ed-up excuse for a city. Choose your future. Choose Scouse.

02-20-2007, 01:01 PM
ZeppelinAir hahahHAHAHahaha.......ha Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: somewhere in Michigan Posts: 544	its basicly about being on a climb, and what someone might go through traped freezing and injure on a remote mountain with every other fellow with you is dead __________________ Little Things "Sittin on a Toilet in a house i dont know, looking all around where the toilet paper go. feeling real uneasy, feeling real uncertain, got to wipe my ass again with a plastic shower curtain" Rodney Carrington-Little Things