Black Wolf (metal, song)

ZeppelinAir · 02-23-2007, 03:02 AM

Black Wolf

A wolfs howl echoes through the forest,
Racing and dodging between the towering pines,
A black streak flies by the scattering creatures,
On the hunt and wont stop till he finds his prey,
Selecting his target and taking action,
With fangs drawn out he leaps majestically in the air and falls onto his prey,
With every slice and stab he slowly kill his victim with no remorse,
Thankful for his kill he drags it back to the pack where the rest of his kin will feed,
A gift from the gods feeds the hungry pack,
Ever so grateful they pray the gods and angels guides its soul back to earth,
Where its spirit will carry on in the wind and the woods,
For all time this will be the way of the pack,
This will be the way of the Indian

sleepy jack · 02-23-2007, 11:47 AM

I really don't see a point to the last line.

"With every slice and stab" try not to use slice and stab, it just sounds bad.

Its alright this seems like a metal song which isn't really my thing.

ZeppelinAir · 02-23-2007, 05:13 PM

im going to extend it to make the picture more clear and to give it more detail and see if that makes it any better

Thread Tools
Show Printable Version Email this Page
Display Modes
Linear Mode Switch to Hybrid Mode Switch to Threaded Mode

02-23-2007, 03:02 AM
ZeppelinAir hahahHAHAHahaha.......ha Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: somewhere in Michigan Posts: 545	Black Wolf Black Wolf A wolfs howl echoes through the forest, Racing and dodging between the towering pines, A black streak flies by the scattering creatures, On the hunt and wont stop till he finds his prey, Selecting his target and taking action, With fangs drawn out he leaps majestically in the air and falls onto his prey, With every slice and stab he slowly kill his victim with no remorse, Thankful for his kill he drags it back to the pack where the rest of his kin will feed, A gift from the gods feeds the hungry pack, Ever so grateful they pray the gods and angels guides its soul back to earth, Where its spirit will carry on in the wind and the woods, For all time this will be the way of the pack, This will be the way of the Indian __________________ Little Things "Sittin on a Toilet in a house i dont know, looking all around where the toilet paper go. feeling real uneasy, feeling real uncertain, got to wipe my ass again with a plastic shower curtain" Rodney Carrington-Little Things

02-23-2007, 11:47 AM
sleepy jack dance music Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 17,772	I really don't see a point to the last line. "With every slice and stab" try not to use slice and stab, it just sounds bad. Its alright this seems like a metal song which isn't really my thing. __________________ I dyed my hair in a motel void met the coroner at the Dreamgate Frontier, He took my hand said I'll help you boy if you really want to disappear.

02-23-2007, 05:13 PM
ZeppelinAir hahahHAHAHahaha.......ha Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: somewhere in Michigan Posts: 545	im going to extend it to make the picture more clear and to give it more detail and see if that makes it any better __________________ Little Things "Sittin on a Toilet in a house i dont know, looking all around where the toilet paper go. feeling real uneasy, feeling real uncertain, got to wipe my ass again with a plastic shower curtain" Rodney Carrington-Little Things