To Frame Your Heart. (album, quote, memories, hands)

**sleepy jack** · 02-25-2007, 05:34 PM

To Frame Your Heart.

I crafted a painting entirely from memories,
Really it was just the photo album of yesterday,
But it was so black and white to see,
For it all was just beauty erased.

So I tried and I tried again to hold it in my hands,
But it just slipped away, like a sand through a sieve,
And you'd think after years of trying to master the art,
I'd be able to hold just one grain, but its hard to believe,
That after so many attempts, I havn't learned anything.

So I thought about it and figured the more I grabbed,
The longer the feeling would last,
But it just slipped away in such a rush,
And how fast I learned who gets the last laugh.

You know, you can hold a memory in your arms,
But a feeling is impossible to grasp,
It just slips away, never meant to last.

oojay · 02-25-2007, 06:16 PM

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Originally Posted by Crowquill

The more longer the feeling would last

Kind of redundant, most likely a typo.

Quote:

And how fast I learned that cupid always gets the last laugh.

Kind of lame :/

Quote:

But a feeling is impossible to grasp,
It just slips away, never meant to last.

Best part of the piece. Excellent

Overall very good.

**sleepy jack** · 02-25-2007, 06:23 PM

typo, i'm removing the cupid line I have no idea why I put it there.

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02-25-2007, 05:34 PM
sleepy jack Bone Machine Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Jesusland Posts: 17,552	To Frame Your Heart. To Frame Your Heart. I crafted a painting entirely from memories, Really it was just the photo album of yesterday, But it was so black and white to see, For it all was just beauty erased. So I tried and I tried again to hold it in my hands, But it just slipped away, like a sand through a sieve, And you'd think after years of trying to master the art, I'd be able to hold just one grain, but its hard to believe, That after so many attempts, I havn't learned anything. So I thought about it and figured the more I grabbed, The longer the feeling would last, But it just slipped away in such a rush, And how fast I learned who gets the last laugh. You know, you can hold a memory in your arms, But a feeling is impossible to grasp, It just slips away, never meant to last. __________________ I'm not blind, I believe in you.

02-25-2007, 06:23 PM
sleepy jack Bone Machine Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Jesusland Posts: 17,552	typo, i'm removing the cupid line I have no idea why I put it there. __________________ I'm not blind, I believe in you.