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Old 03-02-2007, 01:50 AM  
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From What I’ve Learned, This All Doesn’t Mean Much.

I guess im bored of playing with word forms,
And drawing the comparisons between unrelated images,
Trying to transpose all these thoughts that are only half mine,
You see i've fucked up every single line,
I've twisted them and dragged them on too long,
And this clock is starting to count off time,
To rhyme with this heart of mine,
And my eyes they've begun to grow pale,
You say thats impossible but i'll just explain later,
And to wrap this up with the perfect finish line,
Ive grown tired of these pretty words and hollow rhymes.
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Old 03-02-2007, 11:03 AM  
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Is this a rap?
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Old 03-02-2007, 11:52 AM  
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Old 03-02-2007, 11:54 AM  
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And this clock is starting to beat off time
I LOL'd

And it sounds like a rap.
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Old 03-02-2007, 11:59 AM  
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It rhymes a lot..so does rap..

But it flows really well...maybe cause it rhymes but its good either way.
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I'm digging this, home g-dawg. After you rap battle, we should go pop some bizziches with our nines. Lol. But, seriously, good stuff.
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Yeah, my clock was doing it to my grandfather clock. Sound familiar?
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LMFAO, Crowquill. That's the funniest thing I've ever read on a forum, ever.
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