THERACONTEUR21

i just wish you would listen you would help the world
Current mood: depressed


if you watch every thing i do
how can i get ahead
criticizing everything
look at the death

for they are who they are
and i am what i am
ill admit it to you
but listen to me man

its your life and who you are
do you have a nice house
do you drive a new car
is it too hard to be nice to them
is hard for them to forgive
but if your the one with the hard life
its one hard thing to live

now try it now my words of deception
because when all you read this
you wont understand the lesson
but that is wrong of me to judge the people
but wrong of the people to judge me

i still love you all

TheUsedToolguy

I like the positive messages at the end of your posts, it's not easy to always turn the other cheek, when people try to walk all over u? but f*ck, why take the easy way out?

Kevorkian Logic

the point is strong, the writing is weak.

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She was laughing like crazy at the trouble I'm in
Her light eyes were dancing she is insane
Schizophrenia is taking me home

right-track

Do you churn this stuff out off the top of your head?

And what's with the 'current mood' thing?... it's irritating.

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THERACONTEUR21

yeah pretty much off the top of my my head not revised
how is the writng weak