A Falling Leaf Could Plan Its Coarse (quote)

~~THERACONTEUR21~~ · 03-06-2007, 03:14 AM

Emily Looked At Me The Other Day
Man What A Smile
Innocence Is Her Greatest Virtue
For Her Id Run That Mile

I Noticed A Leaf The Other Day
Resting In The Wind
It Fell Upon My Lap
I Found That Same Grin

Emily Looked My Way Again
I Was Suprised To See Her Stare
I Think She Might Wonder
What Might Be There

I Kept That Leaf That Feel On My Lap
The One That Chose Me
It Diserved To Be Shown Care
For Its Long Trip Had Made It Bare

Emily Decided To Take A Walk
Under The Trees Up Against The Bark
No One There Except The Trees
And That One Leaf That Feel To My Knees

~~THERACONTEUR21~~ · 03-06-2007, 04:04 AM

No One Undrstands This

sleepy jack · 03-06-2007, 04:31 AM

I like the the whole idea of this, at first I read the first bit and thought "oh this is going to be sappy" but the leaf part made me like it alot.

Strummer521 · 03-06-2007, 01:06 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by THERACONTEUR21

No One Undrstands This

Why would you say that before you'd recieved any feedback?

And how old are you if you don't mind my asking.

~~THERACONTEUR21~~ · 03-06-2007, 06:16 PM

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03-06-2007, 03:14 AM
~~THERACONTEUR21~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: PIKEVILLE KY Posts: 41	A Falling Leaf Could Plan Its Coarse Emily Looked At Me The Other Day Man What A Smile Innocence Is Her Greatest Virtue For Her Id Run That Mile I Noticed A Leaf The Other Day Resting In The Wind It Fell Upon My Lap I Found That Same Grin Emily Looked My Way Again I Was Suprised To See Her Stare I Think She Might Wonder What Might Be There I Kept That Leaf That Feel On My Lap The One That Chose Me It Diserved To Be Shown Care For Its Long Trip Had Made It Bare Emily Decided To Take A Walk Under The Trees Up Against The Bark No One There Except The Trees And That One Leaf That Feel To My Knees

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03-06-2007, 04:31 AM
sleepy jack dance music Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 17,760	I like the the whole idea of this, at first I read the first bit and thought "oh this is going to be sappy" but the leaf part made me like it alot. __________________ I dyed my hair in a motel void met the coroner at the Dreamgate Frontier, He took my hand said I'll help you boy if you really want to disappear.

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