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Old 03-12-2007, 02:50 PM  
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Default short burst catharsis

what to do when the summer seems so cold
i walk thru telephone poles hoping one will fall
crush this paper heart that was once
burned to ashes, and
punish the criminal that turned winter against us
for she is the one that coaxed my heart
and she is to be condemned in the
same fashion as i
was condemned by her.
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Old 03-12-2007, 02:52 PM  
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Dude, are you serious?
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Old 03-12-2007, 02:55 PM  
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i think it saying more than it says
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Old 03-12-2007, 03:24 PM  
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Like "shit" for instance?
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Old 03-12-2007, 03:31 PM  
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Can you write it clearly...I don't care what it's about atleast write it clearly.
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Can you write it clearly...I don't care what it's about atleast write it clearly.
Yeah.only.idiots.dont.write.clearly.right.?
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Hey I would still be writing that way if I didn't get in trouble
I was writing in emo....God.
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Punish the criminal that turned winter against us < The only good line. Come back when you've outgrown sticky caps and 1337 5p33k.
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you guys are tough.
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