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03-26-2007, 09:10 PM
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Lovely Angel's Song
this song is rock song, I wrote this in inspiration from BECK: Mongolian chop sqaud! XD
Lovely Angel's Song Hey you, the air of love, can you hear me calling for you? My eyes telling you my obsessions that I cannot speak of the truth You have appeared in my dream so we make love unfettered But in order to know my feelings, open up your door Let me see your world and your sketches of memories Shine me with your angelic light Blind me with your lovely sight I’d jump off the cliff for eternal life You are the one who I shall thrive You pour the glitters on my heart I want to see your untainted smile But forget about what you’ve heard of me Just take my hand and come with me Let us hear the lovely angel’s song Let us hear the lonely angel’s song, oh, oh, oh, oh! Now I’m the gentle whisper but do you feel me watching you? My lip are meant to confess my secrets but I’m scared what’ll happen if they do What I can tell you in the sun that I’ll be your love in long tomorrow I’ve survived through lies and sorrows but let’s us fly away together I just cannot be broken and you’ll have my words Shine me with your angelic light Blind me with your lovely sight I’d jump off the cliff for eternal life You are the one who I shall thrive You pour the glitters on my heart I want to see your untainted smile But forget about what you’ve heard of me Just take my hand and come with me Let us hear the lovely angel’s song Let us hear the lovely angel’s song, oh, oh, oh, oh! When we’ll wake up together with the sun, you’ve answer my kiss with midnight shaded lip When the first time I saw you I knew, you were made from the beauty, you were born from the light! Shine me with your angelic light Blind me with your lovely sight I’d jump off the cliff for eternal life You are the one who I shall thrive You pour the glitters on my heart I want to see your untainted smile But forget about what you’ve heard of me Just take my hand and come with me Let us hear the lovely angel’s song Let us hear the lonely angel’s song, oh, oh, oh, oh! Let us hear the lovely angel’s song Let us hear the lovely angel’s song Can you hear me calling for you? Let us hear the lovely angel’s song Let us hear the lovely angel’s song Do you feel me watching you? Let us hear the lovely angel’s song Let us hear the lovely angel’s song, oh, oh, oh, oh!
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03-26-2007, 10:38 PM
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Is The Spider
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Sevendust?
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 Night of the Living Fred Tuesdays at 11PM US EST www.fredoniaradio.com BAND INTERVIEWS |
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03-26-2007, 10:49 PM
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What's Sevendust"?
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03-27-2007, 01:39 AM
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Don't think twice
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isnt that angel son? not song?
also , kyren are all these words real....
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Painstaking devotion and love Surrendered to self preservation From others who care for themselves A blindness that touches perfection But hurts just like anything else Isolation, isolation, isolation |
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03-27-2007, 09:13 AM
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Is The Spider
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Sevendust is a nu metal band that wrote a song almost exactly like this one. The difference is that they didn't have jibberish in it like:
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03-27-2007, 11:12 PM
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0.o that's new to me, but I never heard of that band though. also that part, you look at it the wrong way.
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to Either/or, it's "Lovely Angel's Song" to be exact, and what do you mean "Are all these words real..."?
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03-27-2007, 11:57 PM
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Is The Spider
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You can't have glitter as a plural noun. That and the metaphor itself just doesn't flow.
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03-28-2007, 10:03 PM
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I see because the other parts in the chorus consently have flow so then that part broke the flow of course... make sense...
Maybe this one then... Quote:
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