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03-31-2007, 01:08 AM
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Bone Machine
Join Date: Nov 2004
Location: Jesusland
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spring<3sfall.
spring<3sfall.
Can you recall the day spring fell for fall? Its gentle blooming mixed with falls decay, And through everything spring loved it all, From the gold and red to the leaves falling in a wall, But I guess its no surprise with them being seasons apart, That their love wasn't meant to be from the very start.
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03-31-2007, 08:55 PM
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Bad motherfücker
Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: In The Realms of Poetry
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You couldn't write out "Spring Loves Fall."? Fudge you. Also, the seasons are a major cliche, and this didn't present anything new.
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 Say what again motherfucker, I double dare you, say what one mo' goddamned time!
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03-31-2007, 09:27 PM
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Me and The Major
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: Kentucky
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Pretty much what what ^ said. You've written way better stuff before man.
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