Your Wings Can Shine In The Ocean Love. (dance, songs)

**sleepy jack** · 04-02-2007, 03:18 AM

eh, missing people sucks.

Your Wings Can Shine In The Ocean Love.

Watching the reflections in the water as I throw a penny I found
Heads up on the ground, ripple and sending waves to disturb
The face of an angel I saw on the surface of the pacific.

Wade farther into the sea love and will dance in the waves,
Our happiness was overwhelming, "don't be so far away"
And I know I know, I don't want things to be this way,
But you're the only girl I love and though the sands
Shift you're still all i'm thinking about so avoid the cracking
Of backs coming from beneath our feet and just focus
On the harmony of the waves hitting the beach,
As dreams form of a love too far to reach.

**sleepy jack** · 04-02-2007, 10:11 PM

You guys really suck at replying to songs.

matious · 04-02-2007, 10:15 PM

omg ethan..is this about your girlfriend

>.>

**sleepy jack** · 04-02-2007, 10:15 PM

Yes =) same girl and shes not my girlfriend(<.<someday)

just for kicks · 04-02-2007, 10:42 PM

i really liked this song. i found that i could relate to it right now. maybe i different ending would be good. depends on what direction you want the song to go

Crowe · 04-02-2007, 11:07 PM

This shift in your writing seems now to be a flowing stream of thought instead of a meticulously crafted piece. What makes it great is that instead of getting a sloppy train of thought we get a raw sense of emotion as opposed to synthetic emotions to fill in the gaps.

**sleepy jack** · 04-02-2007, 11:09 PM

Thankyou! Thats probably the best comment i've gotten on a song in the past like two months.

enemyat_thesix · 04-02-2007, 11:19 PM

Meticulous poets are hard to come by nowadays.

**sleepy jack** · 04-02-2007, 11:21 PM

I can also cook a mean grill cheese.

either/or · 04-03-2007, 04:05 AM

i like all the work you do, theres never really much for me to say, i just prefer to observe your work and respect it.

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04-02-2007, 03:18 AM
sleepy jack Bone Machine Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Jesusland Posts: 17,328	Your Wings Can Shine In The Ocean Love. eh, missing people sucks. Your Wings Can Shine In The Ocean Love. Watching the reflections in the water as I throw a penny I found Heads up on the ground, ripple and sending waves to disturb The face of an angel I saw on the surface of the pacific. Wade farther into the sea love and will dance in the waves, Our happiness was overwhelming, "don't be so far away" And I know I know, I don't want things to be this way, But you're the only girl I love and though the sands Shift you're still all i'm thinking about so avoid the cracking Of backs coming from beneath our feet and just focus On the harmony of the waves hitting the beach, As dreams form of a love too far to reach. __________________ You're so evil and I'm so good, I'll make it up to you someday.

04-02-2007, 10:11 PM
sleepy jack Bone Machine Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Jesusland Posts: 17,328	You guys really suck at replying to songs. __________________ You're so evil and I'm so good, I'll make it up to you someday.

04-02-2007, 10:15 PM
matious Music Addict Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 1,461	omg ethan..is this about your girlfriend >.>

04-02-2007, 10:42 PM
just for kicks To The Bat Cave! Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Australia Posts: 159	i really liked this song. i found that i could relate to it right now. maybe i different ending would be good. depends on what direction you want the song to go

04-02-2007, 11:07 PM
Crowe Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Chicago/St. Louie Posts: 711	This shift in your writing seems now to be a flowing stream of thought instead of a meticulously crafted piece. What makes it great is that instead of getting a sloppy train of thought we get a raw sense of emotion as opposed to synthetic emotions to fill in the gaps. __________________ My silly experimental band: www.myspace.com/boyfromthestarsmusic

04-02-2007, 11:09 PM
sleepy jack Bone Machine Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Jesusland Posts: 17,328	Thankyou! Thats probably the best comment i've gotten on a song in the past like two months. __________________ You're so evil and I'm so good, I'll make it up to you someday.

04-02-2007, 11:21 PM
sleepy jack Bone Machine Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Jesusland Posts: 17,328	I can also cook a mean grill cheese. __________________ You're so evil and I'm so good, I'll make it up to you someday.

04-03-2007, 04:05 AM
either/or Don't think twice Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: A basement on the hill Posts: 379	i like all the work you do, theres never really much for me to say, i just prefer to observe your work and respect it. __________________ Painstaking devotion and love Surrendered to self preservation From others who care for themselves A blindness that touches perfection But hurts just like anything else Isolation, isolation, isolation