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Old 04-10-2007, 11:10 AM   #1 (permalink)
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I saw a naked boy
run away from waves
And he chased them down
As they slid away

I would participate
But my youth was glass
Though I want to try
When I hear them crash

And it makes me sad
That he'll never win
That he'll be like me
Disenchanted Man
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Old 04-10-2007, 01:12 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I like it, especially the "...youth was glass..." part.
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Old 04-16-2007, 02:25 AM   #3 (permalink)
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yeah pretty cool little piece here. but what is the youth was glass line... i liked it but maybe if you gave us a look at the youth?
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