IrishWhiskey

Kind of simple, but here you go. It's not the best, I wrote it around 3 a.m. this morning in the midst of an English term paper.



There is a place, far beyond illusion
Through the darkness, beyond all man’s restraints
There is a place, where soft amber light’s glow
Illumines shadows on my face

There’s a place, at the edge of the world
In God’s country, or so it may seem
I stand immersed, in the afterglow
Like a silhouette in a dream

There is a place, a sanctuary without walls,
Where the sound of silence reigns
Troubles not lost, but all is forgotten
Serenity, more than words can sing.

Ace

illuminates*?
I think it's good, and I hate most poetry.
Good job.

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samuel_l

Hmm, The obvious one would be 'there is a place'. SSomething more subtle would be better for the name though.

DontRunMeOver

If it is actually a song then you should call it There Is A Place because then people will be able to link the name and the song straight away. If it's just a poem then something more creative would be better, as the title would be an additional part of the composition.

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zak

i liked it.