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04-25-2007, 11:04 PM
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Negative Creep
Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: Georgia
Posts: 648
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Rotation
This one has a bit of a grungy feel to it.
Not sure if I'm going to modify the ending or not. I suppose we can have a vote on it. Rotation 04/24/07 - 04/25/07 [-----Verse 1-----] Winter skies have fallen On a sunny summer day Clouds have formed Across the sky To keep the light away The future's looking dim But it's better than the past The present's in My own two hands But I can't make it last [-----End Verse-----] [-----Chorus-----] Around and 'round Spin me like a top Keep me in rotation So I'll never want to stop Feed me from your hand So I can live again Let me feel just like I felt When you were still my friend I can't believe you left, me I don't know where you've been You need to be here with, me But I'm alone instead [-----End Chorus-----] [-----Verse 2-----] Freshly picked flowers In a water filled vase Sitting in The window sill Withering away When everything is said And everything is done I'll still be here Waiting for A taste of things to come [-----End Verse-----] [-----Chorus-----] Around and 'round Spin me like a top Keep me in rotation So I'll never want to stop Feed me from your hand So I can live again Let me feel just like I felt When you were still my friend I can't believe you left, me I don't know where you've been You need to be here with, me But I'm alone instead Ohhh... I can't believe you left, me I don't know where you've been You need to be here with, me But I'm alone instead (yelled) Keep me in rotation (x4) [-----End Chorus-----]
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04-25-2007, 11:07 PM
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Groupie
Join Date: Apr 2007
Location: louisiana
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i really like the first verse. good stuff man. and with the right guitar and drums, the ending would sound real good. xD
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04-25-2007, 11:32 PM
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Negative Creep
Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: Georgia
Posts: 648
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Thank you.
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