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05-02-2007, 05:25 PM
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that's my war face.
Join Date: Nov 2005
Posts: 1,451
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Matchstick Girl
my matchstick girl wakes herself up
from her slumber by the gutter her withered frame speaks a thousand words that her mouth can barely mutter s'all smiley and bright on this grim winters night for the lovers holding hands under the lampost light I hold out my arms and I ask her to dance to that song in my head formed purely by romance will be built upon when I'm not this tired  |
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05-02-2007, 05:31 PM
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Avin' It!
Join Date: May 2005
Location: THE PEOPLES ЯEPUBLIK ФF MAИCUИIA
Posts: 5,725
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Scrap the idea that those two verses belong to the same song.
And build on them separately instead.
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