Twist Of Fate (draft)
Just now finished this, and I pretty much think of it as a draft.
Ironically, I probably wont make many changes, if any.
Give me some criticism.
(Good will be appreciated, but bad will be ignored. ^_^)
Twist Of Fate
08/01/07 - 08/02/07
[-----Verse 1-----]
Be my blessing
Not my curse
My little angel
I fear the worst
Is yet to come
But I'll save that sorrow, for another day
It's been a while now
And I can't think
My mind's been overrun
And damaged by mistakes
Accidental - or otherwise
The things I dream about
Seem to take over my life
I hope I wake up - to a better day
One without a path, blocked by enemies
[-----End Verse-----]
[-----Chorus-----]
And I will fight my way, through the gates
And I will overcome, everything you throw at me
You don't have to stay by my side
Cause the rest of my life, will be determined by
A final twist of fate
A final turn of the blade
[-----End Chorus-----]
[-----Verse 2-----]
My bittter blessing
My precious curse
Be my angel
Cause I fear the worst
Come sit beside me
My dearest friend
And tell me what you've done
And where you've been
[-----End Verse-----]
[-----Chorus-----]
And I will fight my way, through the gates
And I will overcome, everything you throw at me
You don't have to stay by my side
Cause the rest of my life, will be determined by
A final twist of fate
A final turn of the blade
[-----End Chorus-----]
[-----Verse 3-----]
I thought of leaving
But I wont
Bitter indifference, has always been my home
And looking back - I've always said
Don't think about moving foward, with the past stuck in your head
[-----End Verse-----]
[-----Chorus-----]
And I will fight my way, through the gates
And I will overcome, everything you throw at me
You don't have to stay by my side
Cause the rest of my life, will be determined by
A final twist of fate
A final turn of the blade
A final twist of fate
A final turn of the blade
A final twist of fate
[-----End Chorus-----]
__________________
She said if time was in a bottle
High up on her shelf
She would knock it over
And make the world stand still
If faith was in her left hand
And love was in her right
She'd put them both together
And raise them to the sky
Last edited by Ace : 08-02-2007 at 02:31 AM.
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