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Old 09-11-2007, 09:25 PM  
kevin55521
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Cool Help make a song



hi im just one of those confused teenagers thats super bored XD

so i felt like writing a song. most of it is off beat a little but i tried to do the best i could to indicate the different pauses in the song by using commas. anyways i need some music to go with the song so if any1 wants to take the song and either tweak it to make it better or add some music, it'd be cool. im thinking even if u wanna just go do some work on adobe audition or sumthing. but if u do please repost a link to what you did so i can see it and if any1 wants im an "ok" singer for vocalists XD. anyways heres the song and i hope u have fun with it.


walking down the road

in the darkness as a light

i cant see where i will go

but im walking around on my own

and i try to try to find my way

im stuck in the darkness day after day

and, im gonna,

miss you, and
want you, but
you'll never know
how i feel, about you.....

i try to try to talk but

no words can be found

and i blow all my chances

when ever your around

and im, gonna

miss you, and
want you, but
you'll never know
how i feel about you......

we, all believe

theres other fish in the sea

but your the only one

the only one in mind

and ill never forget

the good times that

we, were together together again

and im gonna

miss you and
want you but
you will never know
how i feel
how i need you
how i lost my big chance

its me on my own

and ill never know

what we could have been

because i missed you

as i walk down this rooooooooad

and im gonna

miss you and
want you but
you can never know

ill allways remember

cause ill never forget

and now im stuck

right here on my own, without you....

and the road it keeps goin on

forever in the dark

cause i need a light

to help me find myself,

and im,

gonna miss you,
and want you,
but you'll never know

and im stuck in the dark black road

and i cant ever, go on.



P.S. if u wanna make this into like techno or sumthing i dun care but i mainly thought of it as a rock song so that might be the best for it to go with XD. and dont forget to post what u changed/did back
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Old 09-12-2007, 12:43 AM  
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Old 09-12-2007, 05:59 AM  
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