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Old 10-14-2007, 09:09 PM  
sleepy jack
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Default Rough draft

Kind of an experiment I guess, it's different. Excuse any grammar mistakes, or if I randomally switch points of view I havn't read over it yet i'm not in the mood tonight but tell me what you think of the idea.

Hey remember the days when we sat in your room?
The alcoholic nights and smoky days,
Lets go back their, take my hand we'll walk into the light,
We can reflect on old times, before time took us by the hand
And taught me how to write cheesy lines,
And took you on the cliche trip you call a life.

How's the smile, is it still gone? who's the last boy you kissed
Can't recall? That's okay, i'm still dancing between celibacy
And prostitution, but once I figure out where to go i'm set,
Hey do you think we still have a chance? No that's alright
I won't ask again.

And you move your fingers to tell me to shush
My awkward tongue has finally left its clumsy cage,
I smile, it reminds me of old times but what doesn't these days?
Open a bottle and we'll sit like applesauce,
I'll play you my latest song and you can sing along
Once you get the tune, its stolen from an old song
We use to like, you'll pick it up fast.

So I wonder what happened to you,
You seem twenty not seventeen,
But i'll walk you home anyway and tell you everything is alright.
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