I Sin, You Sin (lyrics, metal, punk, genre, title)

evil_hand · 11-04-2007, 10:03 PM

lol.

i'm not seeing how a knowledge of metal is relevant to a punk song.

enemyat_thesix · 11-05-2007, 02:45 PM

well thanks for the input, negative and... negative ^_^

TheBig3KilledMyRainDog · 11-05-2007, 09:07 PM

religion = boring
fun = sin.

deep.

enemyat_thesix · 11-06-2007, 01:02 PM

lol, you missed the entire point of the song

ProggyMan · 11-06-2007, 02:59 PM

Which is?

enemyat_thesix · 11-06-2007, 06:54 PM

carpe diem bro

redINFLUE_TheFineRedLine · 11-07-2007, 05:37 AM

well, being a songwriter myself i have to give kudos on writing one in the first place even though it's not the best

ProggyMan · 11-07-2007, 06:45 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by enemyat_thesix

carpe diem bro

I have a shirt that says that, lol. The words just ooze teenage angst. Seems like you're saying **** authority, I'm gonna' go get laid!

The Dave · 11-07-2007, 07:02 PM

So I love how everyone is giving you feedback but rather than taking the advice to heart you're just acting like an arrogant prick about the whole thing. My advice: Trash the piece and learn how to take some constructive criticism.

Everything you touch isn't golden.

**sleepy jack** · 11-07-2007, 07:08 PM

I don't really see much constructive criticism in here. What I see is someone gave a helpful opinion, which was negative and then everyone jumped on the hate train and started throwing out the common "this song is bad" terms like "cliche" and then bam, it's two pages of useless posts.

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11-04-2007, 10:03 PM
evil_hand Groupie Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Australia Posts: 5	lol. i'm not seeing how a knowledge of metal is relevant to a punk song. __________________ DISREGARD THAT, I SUCK WANGS

11-05-2007, 09:07 PM
TheBig3KilledMyRainDog Maybe I can keep this one Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Bostonia Posts: 3,827	religion = boring fun = sin. deep. __________________ “The night falls gracefully for those who have a love to call their own. But alas, for those to whom love has turned a blind eye – love, it falls like a guillotine” “No more waiting for fate to befall me, no. I have my dreamboat, and together we will find our destiny, choose our ladder to the sky” - Markus Pierson

11-06-2007, 02:59 PM
ProggyMan Reformed Jackass Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 2,461	Which is? __________________ Shut the fuck up and recognize what you holding ain't really broken. -Ian Bavitz If Noah had the benefit of hindsight on his ship he coulda' snatched two unicorns and left behind the mother fuckin' pigs. -Ian Bavitz I <3: Crowquill is cool. Sorta. I hate the Fall Of Troy. And Joy Division. And West Side Story.

11-07-2007, 05:37 AM
redINFLUE_TheFineRedLine Groupie Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: the bible belt = ( Posts: 9	well, being a songwriter myself i have to give kudos on writing one in the first place even though it's not the best

11-07-2007, 07:02 PM
The Dave Me and The Major Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Kentucky Posts: 1,887	So I love how everyone is giving you feedback but rather than taking the advice to heart you're just acting like an arrogant prick about the whole thing. My advice: Trash the piece and learn how to take some constructive criticism. Everything you touch isn't golden. __________________ My collection,winkwinkcoughcough

11-07-2007, 07:08 PM
sleepy jack Bone Machine Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Jesusland Posts: 17,218	I don't really see much constructive criticism in here. What I see is someone gave a helpful opinion, which was negative and then everyone jumped on the hate train and started throwing out the common "this song is bad" terms like "cliche" and then bam, it's two pages of useless posts. __________________ You're so evil and I'm so good, I'll make it up to you someday.