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Old 11-13-2007, 06:09 PM  
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These lyrics are pretty cliche but they're effective with the mood and sound of the song, so when you criticize if it's something like "lols emo" or "lols cliche" then woo!

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A piano is playing in an empty room, the keys seem to sing,
"I tried to love" and the phone in the corner must be broken,
Or maybe my hands are shaking too much to call,
The shadows lift and someone now stands in my place,
It never mattered to you anyway.

It's almost two in the morning or half past three,
I'm laying on the ground hoping i'm strong enough to let go,
My arms are bursting under the strain, who do I owe?
A boy breaks down and falls onto a park bench,
The good life is fading, but he sees dawn coming,
Changing colors and warping and maybe this is how we were meant to be,
With a cigarette burning between your lips,
And a farewell kiss trapped behind my teeth.

Empty graves can only fill with time,
So heres a year of my life, take it as you will
And i'll try and understand just how you feel
You have your life now and I have mine,
I'll drink too much and sing to someone else,
About unrequited love and try to pretend that
Someone will be beside me, when I wake up.
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Old 11-13-2007, 08:01 PM  
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Old 11-14-2007, 11:55 AM  
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But maybe I don't want to finish anything anymore..
maybe I can wait in bed 'til she comes home. and whispers....

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