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11-19-2007, 07:36 PM
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tension and release.
Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: Oakland
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my life is death without you
don't look at me with those eyes
those eyes that doubt and question me, those eyes that ask why i don't say "my life is death without you" and why i don't profess my love for you and shout it from the rooftops while loveless star-gazers pine and lust in the moonlight. these rooftops are an unfit stage to act out the tragedy of my life, the tragedy that you helped to write. we embrace like the crashing of waves like the awkward meeting of hands between strangers, and then depart until only moonlight remains only moonlight remains.
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11-19-2007, 07:41 PM
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Bone Machine
Join Date: Nov 2004
Location: Jesusland
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This isn't one big cliche at all.
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11-19-2007, 07:44 PM
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tension and release.
Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: Oakland
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i took the part out about the songbirds.
should i put it back?
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11-19-2007, 07:47 PM
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Bone Machine
Join Date: Nov 2004
Location: Jesusland
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Yeah put that back as well as the part about crying tears so black and bleeding blood so crimson.
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11-19-2007, 07:48 PM
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MY STEREO HATES YOU
Join Date: Mar 2007
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lol o ****.
I agree though, too cliched.
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