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11-25-2007, 09:03 PM
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Notice you... Noticin' me
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Are we acquainted, Romeo? My name is Riddle, but I usually go by Rhetoric Today I drew an infinity sign and it resembled a fortune cookie What do you see in me that I can't? -Jake V.
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11-25-2007, 09:09 PM
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MY STEREO HATES YOU
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I like it, except for the first line - it's not bad; I don't know, just odd, I suppose.
It's nice, though.
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11-27-2007, 11:54 AM
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Music Rapist
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wee bit short for a song... but its good stuff
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11-27-2007, 10:25 PM
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Notice you... Noticin' me
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Thanks guys.
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11-27-2007, 10:47 PM
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Yea good, but first lines odd.
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11-27-2007, 11:30 PM
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Notice you... Noticin' me
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Changed.
Does it sound a little better now?
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