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Old 12-02-2007, 09:48 PM  
sleepy jack
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Default winter, unrequited, trees, etc.

The trees stand naked and shivering in the wind
They're just longing to be clothed again,
But its cold outside and winter has left them bare,
And I sat there watching the clouds leave my lips,
Thinking of how I should tell you this,
But instead i'll watch the clouds dance across the sky
And long for the sun to come,
I'll sit here and blame my stupid tongue,
For every crossed out day,
I'll blame my stupid tongue,
For never knowing what to say.
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Old 12-02-2007, 10:39 PM  
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Your mom stands naked, bitch. :-P JK. I'll crit it later.
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Old 12-02-2007, 10:45 PM  
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Wow this is amazing... I would take a few of the blame my stupid tounges out but thats just me
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