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12-02-2007, 08:48 PM
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Bone Machine
Join Date: Nov 2004
Location: Jesusland
Posts: 17,552
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winter, unrequited, trees, etc.
The trees stand naked and shivering in the wind
They're just longing to be clothed again, But its cold outside and winter has left them bare, And I sat there watching the clouds leave my lips, Thinking of how I should tell you this, But instead i'll watch the clouds dance across the sky And long for the sun to come, I'll sit here and blame my stupid tongue, For every crossed out day, I'll blame my stupid tongue, For never knowing what to say.
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12-02-2007, 09:39 PM
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Bad motherfücker
Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: In The Realms of Poetry
Posts: 551
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Your mom stands naked, bitch. :-P JK. I'll crit it later.
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12-02-2007, 09:45 PM
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Music Rapist
Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: Somewhere in the U.S
Posts: 403
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Wow this is amazing... I would take a few of the blame my stupid tounges out but thats just me
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A soul in tension thats learning to fly Condition grounded but determined to try Cant keep my eyes from the circling skies Tongue-tied and twisted just an earth-bound misfit Quote:
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