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12-12-2007, 11:13 PM
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You’ve blossomed- known Truth:
“What’s done cannot be undone.” Seung-Hui Cho, take care. -Jake V.
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12-13-2007, 01:09 PM
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I would never dream of considering him blossomed in any way.
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12-14-2007, 06:01 AM
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Eh. I've only seen one haiku to ever catch my interest. They just seem too short for me to get into em'.
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12-17-2007, 12:21 AM
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At the end of the play she commits suicide. I used "blossomed" to represent suicide and "Truth" to symbolize knowledge of the after life.
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12-20-2007, 12:16 AM
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wow. he didnt commit suicide, he committed mass homicide suicide. he was weak so he couldn't handle his situation rationally. I hate dumbass college kids as much as the next guy, but i wouldn't call killing 32 people "blossoming"
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12-20-2007, 12:18 AM
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infamous nimbus
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+ points for writing something so offensive though
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12-23-2007, 03:07 AM
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I'm trying to construct a metaphor, using an allusion to set the tone. The metaphor is such: Our lives are flowers. Our perspectives are always encompassed by the petals. Once we die, the petals unfold.
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12-23-2007, 03:14 AM
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I like that one ^ a hell of alot better.
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12-23-2007, 03:28 AM
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That explanation,
Or are you trying to be facetious?
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12-23-2007, 03:40 AM
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The haiku at the bottom of your other post. Petals. That one is quite nice.
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