Kid, You're a Wreck: Rough Draft (song, Hang)

sleepy jack · 12-27-2007, 04:23 AM

We all wanted to be the one to walk away
Cause kid you're a wreck and so much more unlikeable
Than you use to be, you said you just wanted to write
The saddest song, well look at your life
Nobody's singing along.
You don't look different but you have changed
We're all looking through you, you're not the same,
She once told you, you only ended up hurting the person you love,
You and I both know that isn't true
You only hurt the people who love you.

Jadix · 12-31-2007, 01:18 AM

smart and witty.
short and sweet.

boxcarguy07 · 01-04-2008, 01:52 AM

It took me a while to understand the last three lines, just because I read them too quickly I suppose. But when I got it, man, that's deep, I've never heard that idea expressed like that before. I like it a lot!

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12-27-2007, 04:23 AM
sleepy jack dance music Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 17,776	Kid, You're a Wreck: Rough Draft We all wanted to be the one to walk away Cause kid you're a wreck and so much more unlikeable Than you use to be, you said you just wanted to write The saddest song, well look at your life Nobody's singing along. You don't look different but you have changed We're all looking through you, you're not the same, She once told you, you only ended up hurting the person you love, You and I both know that isn't true You only hurt the people who love you. __________________ I dyed my hair in a motel void met the coroner at the Dreamgate Frontier, He took my hand said I'll help you boy if you really want to disappear.

12-31-2007, 01:18 AM
Jadix infamous nimbus Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 144	smart and witty. short and sweet.

01-04-2008, 01:52 AM
boxcarguy07 Groupie Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 27	It took me a while to understand the last three lines, just because I read them too quickly I suppose. But when I got it, man, that's deep, I've never heard that idea expressed like that before. I like it a lot!