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01-04-2008, 12:08 AM
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Groupie
Join Date: Jan 2008
Posts: 27
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Critique my song please
Hey all... new here
Looking for general critiques on my new song. Can be found here: Stay With Me Title: Stay With Me Lyrics: If you know the way home I will gladly follow Can't live with the idea that I'll still be here tomorrow So hold my hand I've come so far I've travelled from A distant star So stay with me Through the night I need to be where My past is out of sight So stay with me(x3) I need you The blackest ash, Volcano spit Smears my face I'm drowning in it So carry me Please pick me up I can't walk much further I'm sorry, forgive me So stay with me(x3) I need you If you know the way home I will gladly follow Can't live with the idea that I'll still be here tomorrow Thanks! Last edited by boxcarguy07 : 01-05-2008 at 12:17 PM. Reason: Changed link to song |
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01-04-2008, 12:36 AM
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Music Addict
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: Chicago/St. Louie
Posts: 715
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Welll how many lyrics have you critiqued so far, Mr. Duff?
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01-04-2008, 12:46 AM
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Groupie
Join Date: Jan 2008
Posts: 27
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None, sir. It was my first post.
I doubt I'd be of much help with critiquing people... I'm not much of a lyricist, I know mine are really simple. I was more looking for a critique of the recorded song, as well as the lyrics. However, I will do my best to add to the community, and will be adding my two cents where I see fit. |
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01-04-2008, 01:21 AM
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Music Addict
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: Chicago/St. Louie
Posts: 715
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thank ya!
On your recording for this song, the effect you added to your voice really took away what could be for the lyrical content as well as your own vocal talent... is it necessary? |
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01-04-2008, 12:32 PM
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Groupie
Join Date: Jan 2008
Posts: 27
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I remixed it... if you don't mind, let me know if it sounds any better! |
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