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01-06-2008, 03:53 PM
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Account Disabled
Join Date: Jan 2008
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On the Right Track
On the right track
cause brains is what he lack on the right track cause he his such a hack I'm everywhere going to run this place to hell right track is a douche oh well oh well |
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01-06-2008, 03:54 PM
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Avin' It!
Join Date: May 2005
Location: THE PEOPLES ЯEPUBLIK ФF MAИCUИIA
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Too many rhymes in the first bit...bad.
Hell and well...tut tut 2/10
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Choose Liverpool. Choose the dole queue. Choose to scam disability benefit. Choose mind-numbing, grinding efficiency over flair. Choose Torben Piechnik, Istvan Kozma and Paul Stewart. Choose not to win a single league title since the backpass rule was implemented. Choose penalties. Choose car stereos, hubcaps and stanley knives. Choose to trade on your proud sense of tradition and then not lift a finger in protest when two American billionaires who don't even know the name of your club decide to buy it. Choose to win the European Cup whilst only having to play seven matches. Choose to bask in a perpetual, sickening, media love-in. Choose celebrities who **** off out of your city as soon as they have earned the money to do so and then spend the rest of their lives harping on about how wonderful it is. Choose to sing about Munich until confronted with your own tragedy. Choose to end it all in an orgy of self pity, just another excuse to perpetuate the grief culture spawned by your selfish, insular ****ed-up excuse for a city. Choose your future. Choose Scouse. |
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01-06-2008, 03:58 PM
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I wonder if that poem is about you right track. I mean thats your name and you are a douche
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01-06-2008, 04:00 PM
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Avin' It!
Join Date: May 2005
Location: THE PEOPLES ЯEPUBLIK ФF MAИCUИIA
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I'm flattered.
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Choose Liverpool. Choose the dole queue. Choose to scam disability benefit. Choose mind-numbing, grinding efficiency over flair. Choose Torben Piechnik, Istvan Kozma and Paul Stewart. Choose not to win a single league title since the backpass rule was implemented. Choose penalties. Choose car stereos, hubcaps and stanley knives. Choose to trade on your proud sense of tradition and then not lift a finger in protest when two American billionaires who don't even know the name of your club decide to buy it. Choose to win the European Cup whilst only having to play seven matches. Choose to bask in a perpetual, sickening, media love-in. Choose celebrities who **** off out of your city as soon as they have earned the money to do so and then spend the rest of their lives harping on about how wonderful it is. Choose to sing about Munich until confronted with your own tragedy. Choose to end it all in an orgy of self pity, just another excuse to perpetuate the grief culture spawned by your selfish, insular ****ed-up excuse for a city. Choose your future. Choose Scouse. |
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01-06-2008, 04:03 PM
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Bone Machine
Join Date: Nov 2004
Location: Jesusland
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Its face looks like a jar of piss Why rhymes with piss and kiss? Oh how about this The jizz coming from your father Last night in joy when he made you scream and holler
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01-06-2008, 04:31 PM
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I'm a figure of forgotten
Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: canada
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I could see this only working if you kind of did it like circa Survive vibe and filled it in with some awesome solos and more lyrics what you have could be the chores . Keep working on it champ.
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01-07-2008, 11:26 AM
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Music Rapist
Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: Somewhere in the U.S
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it sounds like a 6 year old wroteit..
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A soul in tension thats learning to fly Condition grounded but determined to try Cant keep my eyes from the circling skies Tongue-tied and twisted just an earth-bound misfit Quote:
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01-07-2008, 06:20 PM
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Music Addict
Join Date: Jan 2008
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maybe a smart 6 year old
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Is it cruel or kind Not too speak my mind And to lie to you Rather than hurt you? For after several large gins He'll confess all of his sins But still he'll hide from you Hide what's inside from you |
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01-07-2008, 07:23 PM
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Everyone Does Everything.
Join Date: Apr 2006
Location: I'm back f-ucking or sleeping or something
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I got lullable visual images from this thread title.
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you should be ashamed to be so proud of what you got
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