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03-03-2008, 02:56 PM
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Groupie
Join Date: Feb 2008
Posts: 4
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"Crescent"
“Crescent”
The moon is shining bright the cold air twisting silver the crescent moon is smooth watch it move like water in a stream The dark nights shimmer in the light The bright days twist into the dark Reflecting from the stars Slip away journey through the vast space and the moon is streaming for you into the light Take away the craters that refold the light The crescent moon is gleaming remembering the days before light The song isn't finished... I was just bored and decided to make a song and didn't finish it. What does everyone think of it? |
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03-03-2008, 05:28 PM
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Da Hiphopopotamus
Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: Not in Texas
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I really like the imagery. :{)
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03-04-2008, 06:43 PM
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Diskobox
Join Date: Jan 2008
Posts: 675
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It does sound very unfinished...perhaps you should finish it first?
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