About a Girl (fan, Kiss, title, Hang)

**sleepy jack** · 03-30-2008, 05:24 PM

You are the gentle circling sky
That swirls and turns over my head,
And I fall asleep looking at your stars
Wondering just how far I am from a light
So brilliant that it tears through space,
To shine on me in my darkest nights,
I long to only see you fall from above
And bring me a light so beautiful,
I don't think you know just how precious you are.

Your sun never goes down it just disappears
As the earth spins around,
And your moons are beautiful
Their silver glow,
I know in the blackest of nights
That you're by my side,
Like I stand by yours,
And I’d lay down my life to see your eyes shine
Like in all my daydreams.

And you’re the life giving air that I breathe,
And you’re the only lips I will kiss,
And you’re the one who makes me exist,
And you're my greatest muse,
And you’re the only one I will love,
And you’re everything that I love for,
And you’re an angel,
And perfect.

swim · 03-30-2008, 06:13 PM

ethan don't you mean

I need an easy friend
I do, With an ear to lend
I do, Think you fit this shoe
I do, Won't you have a clue

I take advantage while
You hang me out to dry
But I can't see you every night free
...I do

I'm standing in your line
I do Hope you have the time
I do Pick up number two
I do Keep a date with you

I take advantage while
You hang me out to dry
But I can't see you every night free

I need an easy friend
I do With an ear to lend
I do Think you fit this shoe
I do Won't you have a clue

I take advantage while
You hang me out to dry
But I can't see you every night,
no I can't see you every night...
free

I do...

I do...

I do...

I do...

**sleepy jack** · 03-30-2008, 06:16 PM

That is exactly what I mean.

Blain · 03-30-2008, 10:33 PM

Last paragraph is great, first 2 I'm not a big fan of.

Most cliche title ever though.

**sleepy jack** · 03-30-2008, 10:33 PM

I don't even have a title =/

Blain · 03-31-2008, 03:12 AM

I assumed About A Girl was the title lol.

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03-30-2008, 05:24 PM
sleepy jack Bone Machine Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Jesusland Posts: 17,242	About a Girl You are the gentle circling sky That swirls and turns over my head, And I fall asleep looking at your stars Wondering just how far I am from a light So brilliant that it tears through space, To shine on me in my darkest nights, I long to only see you fall from above And bring me a light so beautiful, I don't think you know just how precious you are. Your sun never goes down it just disappears As the earth spins around, And your moons are beautiful Their silver glow, I know in the blackest of nights That you're by my side, Like I stand by yours, And I’d lay down my life to see your eyes shine Like in all my daydreams. And you’re the life giving air that I breathe, And you’re the only lips I will kiss, And you’re the one who makes me exist, And you're my greatest muse, And you’re the only one I will love, And you’re everything that I love for, And you’re an angel, And perfect. __________________ You're so evil and I'm so good, I'll make it up to you someday.

03-30-2008, 06:13 PM
swim Everyone Does Everything. Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: coastal plain North Carolina Posts: 4,396	ethan don't you mean I need an easy friend I do, With an ear to lend I do, Think you fit this shoe I do, Won't you have a clue I take advantage while You hang me out to dry But I can't see you every night free ...I do I'm standing in your line I do Hope you have the time I do Pick up number two I do Keep a date with you I take advantage while You hang me out to dry But I can't see you every night free I need an easy friend I do With an ear to lend I do Think you fit this shoe I do Won't you have a clue I take advantage while You hang me out to dry But I can't see you every night, no I can't see you every night... free I do... I do... I do... I do... __________________ you should be ashamed to be so proud of what you got http://www.mediafire.com/?ryxhwjmb1y9 http://www.mediafire.com/?g4wzjzjz1gu

03-30-2008, 06:16 PM
sleepy jack Bone Machine Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Jesusland Posts: 17,242	That is exactly what I mean. __________________ You're so evil and I'm so good, I'll make it up to you someday.

03-30-2008, 10:33 PM
Blain w0rd Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Suva, Fiji Posts: 1,030	Last paragraph is great, first 2 I'm not a big fan of. Most cliche title ever though.

03-30-2008, 10:33 PM
sleepy jack Bone Machine Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Jesusland Posts: 17,242	I don't even have a title =/ __________________ You're so evil and I'm so good, I'll make it up to you someday.

03-31-2008, 03:12 AM
Blain w0rd Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Suva, Fiji Posts: 1,030	I assumed About A Girl was the title lol.