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Old 03-30-2008, 05:24 PM  
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You are the gentle circling sky
That swirls and turns over my head,
And I fall asleep looking at your stars
Wondering just how far I am from a light
So brilliant that it tears through space,
To shine on me in my darkest nights,
I long to only see you fall from above
And bring me a light so beautiful,
I don't think you know just how precious you are.

Your sun never goes down it just disappears
As the earth spins around,
And your moons are beautiful
Their silver glow,
I know in the blackest of nights
That you're by my side,
Like I stand by yours,
And I’d lay down my life to see your eyes shine
Like in all my daydreams.

And you’re the life giving air that I breathe,
And you’re the only lips I will kiss,
And you’re the one who makes me exist,
And you're my greatest muse,
And you’re the only one I will love,
And you’re everything that I love for,
And you’re an angel,
And perfect.
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Old 03-30-2008, 06:13 PM  
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ethan don't you mean

I need an easy friend
I do, With an ear to lend
I do, Think you fit this shoe
I do, Won't you have a clue

I take advantage while
You hang me out to dry
But I can't see you every night free
...I do

I'm standing in your line
I do Hope you have the time
I do Pick up number two
I do Keep a date with you

I take advantage while
You hang me out to dry
But I can't see you every night free


I need an easy friend
I do With an ear to lend
I do Think you fit this shoe
I do Won't you have a clue

I take advantage while
You hang me out to dry
But I can't see you every night,
no I can't see you every night...
free

I do...

I do...

I do...

I do...
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Old 03-30-2008, 06:16 PM  
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That is exactly what I mean.
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Last paragraph is great, first 2 I'm not a big fan of.

Most cliche title ever though.
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Old 03-30-2008, 10:33 PM  
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I don't even have a title =/
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Old 03-31-2008, 03:12 AM  
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I assumed About A Girl was the title lol.
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