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04-20-2008, 04:30 AM
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Groupie
Join Date: Jan 2008
Posts: 6
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please review
lyrics to an as-of-yet-untitled song.
with your tongue free of teeth you'll scream satellites and swallow a sun that never shines your eyes swelled to immeasurable size raining on us it feels like love like love like love any feedback is appreciated. |
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04-20-2008, 11:52 AM
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Groupie
Join Date: Apr 2008
Location: My heart is in Ohio
Posts: 4
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What's the tune like?
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God. He's my main man. Suckahh. |
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04-28-2008, 07:26 PM
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Ima teen playin geetarh
Join Date: Apr 2008
Location: Perv -_-
Posts: 4
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Good so far... keep writing this!
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05-07-2008, 08:38 AM
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Bringer of Carrots
Join Date: May 2008
Location: New York, NY
Posts: 347
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So far it seems like perfect poetry... makes little to no sense and sounds very clever
 good job. I would like to hear or read it when it is finished. |
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