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Old 04-28-2008, 09:41 PM  
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Default Getting Drunk With Your Ex-Girlfriend

Hey get some ice water
Maybe you could use it to
Put out the fire in your eyes,
Oh wait!

This bottle is just waiting
To be cracked right open,
We'll drink away our dreams tonight.
I'm that stupid kind of lush,
Your mother forgot to tell you about.

It's getting so dark outside and I know
How much you hate the winter,
It's not my fault its always so cold here,
I'll hold you close though I'm even more
Of a virgin than your middle school boyfriend.

I can't promise I'll maintain
Any sort of composure,
You know how I get when I drink too much,
It's the silly kid in me that still can hear
The wind call your name.
It was so beautiful when I first heard it,
The horizon was like a wet match
That sparked but refused to ignite,
As the hills changed from green to gold.

You falling asleep on my shoulder
Is so much like deja vu,
And I know what I can't have,
But I wish I could still have you.
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Old 04-28-2008, 09:45 PM  
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did you at least TRY to stick it in her pooper??
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Old 04-28-2008, 09:46 PM  
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Meh she has a boyfriend =[
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Old 04-28-2008, 09:54 PM  
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did you at least TRY to stick it in her pooper??
I repeat

You know when people say that "nice guys finish last"???

You realize that they aren't kidding
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Old 04-28-2008, 09:56 PM  
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I didn't =[
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Old 04-28-2008, 09:59 PM  
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Shame

Relinquish your penis IMMEDIATELY!!!
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Old 04-28-2008, 10:02 PM  
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Old 04-29-2008, 03:59 AM  
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Been here!
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Old 05-02-2008, 06:13 PM  
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best thing about this thread is murder's avatar


but seriously ethan, you need to stop writing about relationships, especially those with girls. all of your poems are the same. try to break out and write about something original, more abstract maybe.

i'm not bashing you, i really feel like your poetry is stagnating
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Old 05-03-2008, 08:08 AM  
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This poem brings back moments of intamacy with ex-grilfriends...which is kind of uncomfortable when I think more about it.
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