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07-17-2008, 01:09 PM
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Groupie
Join Date: Jul 2008
Posts: 4
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What Do You Think Of These Lyrics?
The city lights
(As they pass by) The writing on the walls pictures of this all I know now what you think of me (Thinking now you never told me) I know now what you think of me (Thinking now you never told me) The way you walk Compliments the way you talk And it looks so good (It looks so good) Slip off your fingertips I taste him on your lips like I know you would (I know you would) And I regret (The things I've said) But it doesn't matter anyways I know now what you think of me (Thinking now you never told me) I know now what you think of me (Thinking now you never told me) The way you walk Compliments the way you talk And it looks so good (It looks so good) Slip off your fingertips I taste him on your lips like I know you would (I know you would) I know now what you think of me I know now what you think of me I know now what you think of me (Thinking now you never told me) The way you walk Compliments the way you talk And it looks so good (It looks so good) Slip off your fingertips I taste him on your lips like I know you would (I know you would) |
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07-17-2008, 06:58 PM
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n/a
Join Date: May 2007
Posts: 949
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dull
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07-18-2008, 01:03 AM
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The Elitest Elitist
Join Date: Jun 2008
Location: Earth
Posts: 1,530
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Songs without verses tend to get boring quickly.
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08-15-2008, 08:05 AM
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Q: Are we not men?
Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: Melbourne
Posts: 762
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I would reconsider you're structure, your themes, your choice of words and phrasing...in short most everything. Reading some good poetry may be good.
no offence...its a subjective art
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08-23-2008, 10:05 PM
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Music Addict
Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: Oregon
Posts: 94
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Honestly, I just skimmed through, because I got bored. :/
I agree with FireInCairo.
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08-23-2008, 10:45 PM
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Occams Razor
Join Date: Jul 2007
Location: The end of the Earth
Posts: 1,595
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people will always be critical and usually they're correct, it's more about delivery in terms of lyrics.
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