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Old 09-08-2008, 04:53 AM  
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I've tightened the cork
To the bottle I'm sending
I'm ready to find a new shore.
I think I'll be fine
In the waves of the ocean
As long as I wash up on yours.
Drifting with hope
And my fingers crossed twice
I'm holding my breath all the way.
I sing with the moonlight
And dance to the foam
While the current just lifts me away.
I've whispered your name
Through the cracks of my dreams
Let it pass through my lips like a song.
If I'm a blank page
You're a true poet's pen
We were meant to be "us" all along.
So search through the driftwood,
Sand, small bits of shell,
Whatever else you may discover.
In the bottle I sent you
Filled up with my love
There is me for you to uncover.
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Old 09-11-2008, 03:47 PM  
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I love your lyrics and they go with your name and picture.
You make me think of kate bush wuthering heights.
But with added lewis carol.
I'd vote you the best contributor here.
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Old 09-11-2008, 04:32 PM  
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Why thank you.
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Old 09-11-2008, 09:58 PM  
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you do know this is a police song...right?
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No.
Well yes,
But no.
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