my first song post

dedicated · 11-22-2009, 10:44 AM

The genre of the music I write is 80s rock. Hair metal, heavy metal, etc. Just so you know.
Here is what it will be like once I start writing the music to it.

[Slow, quiet guitar intro]

I know you're scared
Cause you can't bear
The pain of being who you are

Well heres what I say
See it my way
It could be worse, be glad you're not me

[explosion of guitars, music gets fast]

You could be me
Lost in a world full of jumbled colors
Then you'll see
Whats real is bad, whats good is dream

Please don't come inside
I'll infect you
It won't be your fault
Its spreading like a wildfire, theres nothing you can do

[interlude]

You could be me
Screaming at the world, but you're never heard
Then you'll see
You were put on this earth to fight this fight alone

Please don't come inside
I'll infect you
It won't be your fault
This mess is spreading like a fire, theres nothing you can do

alltimelow · 12-24-2009, 08:40 PM

Sounds, good

duncan · 12-29-2009, 06:36 AM

You post only the lyrics how about the chords ...

Lisa Nicole · 12-30-2009, 07:43 PM

it would be nice to hear the sad music that goes with such sad lyrics.

Mick · 12-31-2009, 12:28 AM

Pretty good lyrics, not as corny as some.

samezoobi · 12-31-2009, 12:52 AM

Hello.
According to me, This is best Lyrics because each word has own meaning and I like so much this type of song. I like sad song and This is my one of the favourite.
Thanks for posting.

11-22-2009, 10:44 AM	#1 (permalink)
dedicated Groupie Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: Pennsylvania Posts: 7	my first song post The genre of the music I write is 80s rock. Hair metal, heavy metal, etc. Just so you know. Here is what it will be like once I start writing the music to it. [Slow, quiet guitar intro] I know you're scared Cause you can't bear The pain of being who you are Well heres what I say See it my way It could be worse, be glad you're not me [explosion of guitars, music gets fast] You could be me Lost in a world full of jumbled colors Then you'll see Whats real is bad, whats good is dream Please don't come inside I'll infect you It won't be your fault Its spreading like a wildfire, theres nothing you can do [interlude] You could be me Screaming at the world, but you're never heard Then you'll see You were put on this earth to fight this fight alone Please don't come inside I'll infect you It won't be your fault This mess is spreading like a fire, theres nothing you can do __________________ If and when, Ronnie James Dio dies, God will step down and Dio shall take his place.

12-30-2009, 07:43 PM	#4 (permalink)
Lisa Nicole Groupie Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Burlington, Ontario, Canada Posts: 6	it would be nice to hear the sad music that goes with such sad lyrics. __________________ Please do not mistake me for, another cold someone...

12-31-2009, 12:52 AM	#6 (permalink)
samezoobi Groupie Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 2	Hello. According to me, This is best Lyrics because each word has own meaning and I like so much this type of song. I like sad song and This is my one of the favourite. Thanks for posting. __________________ vitamine c

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12-24-2009, 08:40 PM	#2 (permalink)
alltimelow Groupie Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: haha,no Posts: 1	Sounds, good

12-29-2009, 06:36 AM	#3 (permalink)
duncan Groupie Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 3	You post only the lyrics how about the chords ...

12-31-2009, 12:28 AM	#5 (permalink)
Mick Antidisestablishmentarian Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Sydney, Australia Posts: 72	Pretty good lyrics, not as corny as some.