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05-09-2005, 02:09 PM
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Bright F*cking Red
Join Date: Jan 2005
Location: San Diego
Posts: 2,180
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memories for the dead
this is one of my bands songs. it will probably be the first one we record. tell me what you think
 who am i? what am i? am i everything i should be? living everyday moment by moment regertting the past while fearing the future holding on to dying feelings as they slip away chorus: im just a fleeting memory a photograph faded to black i have no future left just an unhappy beginning kill the lights kill the sound its all over now your face is all thats left to remember but even it is disappearing as i scream for one last chance that i know will never come just like the old memories wont roses turn from red to black and the dead wish for life again so i say my final line finish my final scene and silently walk off stage withoug the crowd knowing
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How'd I end up here to begin with? I don't know. Why do I start what I can't finish? Oh please, don't barrage me with questions to all those ugly answers. My ego's like my stomach- it keeps shitting what I feed it. But maybe I don't want to finish anything anymore.. maybe I can wait in bed 'til she comes home. and whispers.... Quote:
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05-09-2005, 02:26 PM
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Music Addict
Join Date: Apr 2005
Location: Houston, TX
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This is the best one I've read on here so far.
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05-09-2005, 04:49 PM
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contrast&compare.
Join Date: Jan 2005
Posts: 689
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yet another super good song..
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Jesus Christ, I'm alone again, so what did you do those three days you were dead?
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05-10-2005, 09:57 AM
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Music Addict
Join Date: Feb 2004
Location: JMU
Posts: 3,151
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i don't like the first stanza but after that it picks up nicely. I especially like the tie in to a live audience. i feel the same way sometimes. some of the kids at our shows know songs and even some of my friends have my bands songs quoted in their online profiles but non of them really know what drove me to write it. very deep dude.
sounds Rise Against-ish. is it? |
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05-10-2005, 10:21 AM
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Bright F*cking Red
Join Date: Jan 2005
Location: San Diego
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we sorta take after bands more like atreyu, but with some of our stuff you might hear a rise against influence. this song in particular is not though.
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How'd I end up here to begin with? I don't know. Why do I start what I can't finish? Oh please, don't barrage me with questions to all those ugly answers. My ego's like my stomach- it keeps shitting what I feed it. But maybe I don't want to finish anything anymore.. maybe I can wait in bed 'til she comes home. and whispers.... Quote:
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06-07-2005, 04:41 PM
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Groupie
Join Date: Jun 2005
Posts: 2
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 its good. doesn't really sound like any specific band, thats good. |
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