the power123456

Sometimes I just don’t understand,
The ways that you make me feel,
I know your times in high demand,
But why can’t you ever seal the deal.

Maybe I will write to you a song,
That I can play for you all night long,
Maybe then you could see,
All the things I want for you and me.

You’re looking close but you’re never near,
Sometimes I’m too far but I still speak,
I keep nearby, but you’re regretting me dear,
And you’re saying the words that make me weak.

Maybe I will write to you a song,
That I can play for you all night long,
Maybe then you could see,
All the things I want for you and me.

Maybe I can fight for you with my life,
Maybe I can surprise you some way,
Maybe my hearts been stabbed with a knife,
Sometimes I don’t feel so good like today.

Maybe I will write to you a song,
That I can play for you all night long,
Maybe then you could see,
All the things I want for you and me.

Some times I feel like I’ve been hit by a truck,
Just to keep sane, I put my pride on the line,
I’m just a guy, who doesn’t have much luck,
But It’s always you that makes everything fine.

Maybe I will write to you a song,
That I can play for you all night long,
Maybe then you could see,
All the things I want for you and me.

the power123456

any feedback on the lyrics?

scleaves

"Maybe I will write to you a song,
That I can play for you all night long,
Maybe then you could see,
All the things I want for you and me."

Gets repetitive. Mix it up with a one word variation such as for example, "Hey!"

the power123456

i get what ya mean thanks for reading

maniac

stop d repetition bt it ws kolllllll