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Old 06-16-2005, 10:35 PM  
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There are times when Your whispers scream to me
For there are truths that You long to teach to me
Sometimes I hear, still I will not listen to Your voice
And so You wait, for You’ve given me a choice
So I know that You are here
My patient Lord, my Comfort, my King
So I will try much harder to remember all Your scars
Lord Jesus, I am Yours

Victory won, yet I ignore the price You paid
Selfishly planned for the sins that I have made
With Your pierced hands, You gave new life to me
Transgressions bound to You upon that tree

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So I will listen to Your Word
And I will praise Your name, O God
And in spite of all of these worldly powers
I will give my life to You

There is no shame in the gospel of my Lord
In heaven’s name, the Word will be my sword
And I will march into battle with my God
Remembering that it’s my life that You have bought

And so I know that You are here
My patient Lord, my Comfort, my King
So I will try much harder to remember all Your scars
Lord Jesus, I am Yours
I know...I know, Lord Jesus, I am Yours
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Old 06-16-2005, 11:00 PM  
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i take it you are a devoted christian.

hey, it seems like a good worship song.
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Old 06-17-2005, 01:32 PM  
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Wonderful.

Really, i did enjoy it. tiny little error though. Jesus wasn't nailed on a tree. I'm assuming you did that in the intrest of rhyming but....
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