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Old 05-06-2014, 04:56 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Default Check my two musics and tell me something bout them

The first one is finished and it's called "Never Give Up":

You're nearly at the bottom
and affraid to succeed.
You're like a very pretty flower
but you don't plant your seed

You know you have the skills
but you can't go forward
all this because you think
that you will be awkward

C'mon, stand up
you should be though
Let's go, oh yeah
we're bringing it up
so what, who cares
if you're good or not
just show them what you have
and never GIVE UP! (chorus x2)

If you don't try to make it
then you'll fail for sure
You may lose every battle
and you can still win the war

So go ahead, move foward,
you're not alone
You know you're a king
and you will claim your throne.

Try to reach your max
then push it harder
This isn't an advice
this is an order!

C'mon, stand up
you should be though
Let's go, oh yeah
we're bringing it up
so what, who cares
if you're good or not
just show them what you have
and never GIVE UP! (chorus x2)

Never GIVE UP!

Never GIVE UP!

And now, that's it,
end of the test
you only got this far
cuz you tried your best!


The second is called: "This Pain": (this one is unfinished)

All I can see
is the time that we spent
talking and talking,
saying what we meant

Chatting for hours
and thinking 'bout you
it was the only thing
that I could do

We had some fights
when things went wrong
but after some time
we were getting along

I know I'm so stupid
Don't know what I do
I think I have lost
my right to love you

I know it hurts but I have to say
I loved you, I lost you, I cry everyday
Tears on my pillow, won't go away
And now everything looks grayer than gray
I need this pain to get out of my way
I know that I failed,
I made a mistake
Girl, please, listen to me
Let the past be erased
Without you i'm dying
You can't be replaced.

PS: I don't plan to sing them, since I can't sing properly, but if anyone isn't feeling creative, pm me and ask for permission to use this musics.
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