bonespirit

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Don't you dare
F***ing pretend like you even care
I don't suppose you know what that word means
Cos your comforting is just killing my dreams
D'you still think life is a stage?
Cos this play won't have a happy ending
It's not just my age
Well the young ones, they won't understand
And when the adults lend a helping hand
It's easy
To act like you know this game
Well I don't wanna pretend any longer
Is it a game to you?
Is it because I'm mad or just cos I'm younger?
The wrong thing to do
Well you obviously don't know what to say
Cos you're just waiting for the day you get paid
While my thoughts are in this f***ing disarray
I have an excuse
Cos you all pretend
A wise woman once told me
All the world is a judge, but that doesn't compare
Cos I'm judging myself
Don't you dare, you f***er
Would you dare?
Would you pray for me?
If you got the chance, cos I'm going to hell now
That was the wrong thing to say
You bloody hurt me
Well I don't wanna pretend any longer
Is it a game to you?
Is it because I'm mad or just cos I'm younger?
The wrong thing to do
Well you obviously don't know what to say
You're just waiting for the day you get paid
And if you wanna play it like a game, well I'll play
Cos I invented lying
You'll never know what you did to me
You'll never be my sanctuary
Death holidays are waiting for me
I'll always blame
You'll never know what you do to me
You'll never see my sanctuary
Death's on her way, she's waiting for me
I blame myself
I don't wanna pretend any longer
Is it a game to you?
Is it because I'm mad or just cos I'm younger?
The wrong thing to do
Well you obviously don't know what to say
Cos you're just waiting for the day you get paid
While my thoughts are in this f***ing disarray
I have an excuse
Judgmental playwright
I don't wanna pretend any longer
Is it a game to you?
Is it because I'm mad or just cos I'm younger?
If you wanna play it like a game, then I'll play along
I invented lying
But we all pretend.