neyo smith

I wrote lyrics for the first time. Its based on a true story. I really would like to know everyone's comments.

Just to make you happy



I said what I had to say
Even though you don’t want it
I held my feeling for so long
Without a glimpse of hope

Even though we were friends
I was totally invisible after
But we share part of life
We can’t help but run into

So,
Just to make you happy
I made up a lie
Which help us share that part of life
But feels like I would be stuck in that lie forever

When you heard, I haven’t changed
You couldn’t help but ignore
The part of life we share
I do want you to be unhappy

So,
Just to make you happy
I made up a lie
Which help us share that part of life
But feels like I would be stuck in that lie forever

Just to make you happy
Just to make you happy

Just to make you…….. happy



Story behind the song, guy falls in love with one of his class mates. She is not interested in him but he can’t forget about her. She starts ignoring him because she does not want to give him any hope. They both have same bunch of friends from school and she loves go out and have fun with them. But she stopped hanging around them because he was a part of that group. This made guy unhappy. So he made up the lie that he is not interested in her any more so she could relax and be friends again. Although it worked out great he is stuck in that lie now and it’s killing him inside.

Black Francis

I like it.

it could use a little work & refinement but i like the message.

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