IT HURTS tell me what cha think please? (rap, rock)

Mr Slogan · 07-15-2005, 03:00 PM

IT HURTS
VERSE 1

IT HURTS
Young homie, when ya fall off ya skate board.
Or when ya cost ya team the game-n-don't settle the score.
IT HURTS
Baby girl, when ya fall off ya bike.
Or you can have everything, that u want and like.
IT HURTS
2 Keep all ya emotions balled up inside.
And all ya life you've been decieved and fed nothing but lies.
IT HURTS
When ya work 8hrs + on ya feet
And ya hustle to pay ya bills-n-4 ya kidz to eat.
IT HURTS
Everytime ya turn on ya T.V.
And ya still see our soldiers dying over seas.
I KNOW IT HURTS
When ya see a relationship, on the rocks and fall apart.
or a close knit family-removed like a weakend heart.
YEAH IT HURTS
When ya dough is low-n-you don't have no food.
Ya so called friends-n-neighbors-turn their backs and act a fool.
-N- LORD IT HURTS
At night-when ya alone and you wallow and cry.
The burning sensation, while ya rub, come 2 ya eyes.
-N- STILL IT HURTS
When ya lose ----the one ya love.
Personally, i miss my Mom- cause she was my dove.
I KNOW IT HURTS
When ya feel like ya talkin 2 ya-self.
Spilled Literature, wasted and placed on the shelf.
YA KNOW IT HURTS
When ya feel you have nothing left.
All ya choices-n-decisions and pains all you kept.

I wrote these pages straight from my heart.
there's 2 much going on, so i try to make a new start.
2 much pains benn rolling-taped-yeah recorded.
I'm bringing some love here, cause it has departed.
And that's the way Mr Slogan plans to bring peace.
This is to connect with an audience-that like me has felt grief.

yall holla and keep it real
tell me what cha think?

God Bless

Fenixpunk · 07-15-2005, 03:07 PM

that ****s well written. What style are you going for? cuz when i read it, it sounds very transplant/op-ivy influenced.

Mr Slogan · 07-15-2005, 03:11 PM

a staright foward path- so yeah transplant form.
thanks for the comment
was welcomed and needed.

anticipation · 07-15-2005, 03:38 PM

that totally doesnt suck. thumbs up for you my man.

riseagainstrocks · 07-15-2005, 05:47 PM

i dislike rap, but this tells a story like rap is supposed to do. yay. i like it.

BabyGurl928 · 07-16-2005, 12:55 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mr Slogan

IT HURTS
VERSE 1

IT HURTS
Young homie, when ya fall off ya skate board.
Or when ya cost ya team the game-n-don't settle the score.
IT HURTS
Baby girl, when ya fall off ya bike.
Or you can have everything, that u want and like.
IT HURTS
2 Keep all ya emotions balled up inside.
And all ya life you've been decieved and fed nothing but lies.
IT HURTS
When ya work 8hrs + on ya feet
And ya hustle to pay ya bills-n-4 ya kidz to eat.
IT HURTS
Everytime ya turn on ya T.V.
And ya still see our soldiers dying over seas.
I KNOW IT HURTS
When ya see a relationship, on the rocks and fall apart.
or a close knit family-removed like a weakend heart.
YEAH IT HURTS
When ya dough is low-n-you don't have no food.
Ya so called friends-n-neighbors-turn their backs and act a fool.
-N- LORD IT HURTS
At night-when ya alone and you wallow and cry.
The burning sensation, while ya rub, come 2 ya eyes.
-N- STILL IT HURTS
When ya lose ----the one ya love.
Personally, i miss my Mom- cause she was my dove.
I KNOW IT HURTS
When ya feel like ya talkin 2 ya-self.
Spilled Literature, wasted and placed on the shelf.
YA KNOW IT HURTS
When ya feel you have nothing left.
All ya choices-n-decisions and pains all you kept.

I wrote these pages straight from my heart.
there's 2 much going on, so i try to make a new start.
2 much pains benn rolling-taped-yeah recorded.
I'm bringing some love here, cause it has departed.
And that's the way Mr Slogan plans to bring peace.
This is to connect with an audience-that like me has felt grief.

yall holla and keep it real
tell me what cha think?

God Bless

thats sick man, keep it up yo

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07-15-2005, 03:00 PM
Mr Slogan Groupie Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Dirty South, Marrero/New Orleans. LA Posts: 22	IT HURTS tell me what cha think please? IT HURTS VERSE 1 IT HURTS Young homie, when ya fall off ya skate board. Or when ya cost ya team the game-n-don't settle the score. IT HURTS Baby girl, when ya fall off ya bike. Or you can have everything, that u want and like. IT HURTS 2 Keep all ya emotions balled up inside. And all ya life you've been decieved and fed nothing but lies. IT HURTS When ya work 8hrs + on ya feet And ya hustle to pay ya bills-n-4 ya kidz to eat. IT HURTS Everytime ya turn on ya T.V. And ya still see our soldiers dying over seas. I KNOW IT HURTS When ya see a relationship, on the rocks and fall apart. or a close knit family-removed like a weakend heart. YEAH IT HURTS When ya dough is low-n-you don't have no food. Ya so called friends-n-neighbors-turn their backs and act a fool. -N- LORD IT HURTS At night-when ya alone and you wallow and cry. The burning sensation, while ya rub, come 2 ya eyes. -N- STILL IT HURTS When ya lose ----the one ya love. Personally, i miss my Mom- cause she was my dove. I KNOW IT HURTS When ya feel like ya talkin 2 ya-self. Spilled Literature, wasted and placed on the shelf. YA KNOW IT HURTS When ya feel you have nothing left. All ya choices-n-decisions and pains all you kept. I wrote these pages straight from my heart. there's 2 much going on, so i try to make a new start. 2 much pains benn rolling-taped-yeah recorded. I'm bringing some love here, cause it has departed. And that's the way Mr Slogan plans to bring peace. This is to connect with an audience-that like me has felt grief. yall holla and keep it real tell me what cha think? God Bless

07-15-2005, 03:07 PM
Fenixpunk The Erroneous Hoodlum Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: West Side Phoenix Posts: 2,128	that ****s well written. What style are you going for? cuz when i read it, it sounds very transplant/op-ivy influenced. __________________ This message has been approved by Shawn Erroneous - Hoodlum Hardcore

07-15-2005, 03:11 PM
Mr Slogan Groupie Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Dirty South, Marrero/New Orleans. LA Posts: 22	a staright foward path- so yeah transplant form. thanks for the comment was welcomed and needed.

07-15-2005, 05:47 PM
riseagainstrocks Music Addict Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: JMU Posts: 3,151	i dislike rap, but this tells a story like rap is supposed to do. yay. i like it. __________________ www.siegemusic.blogspot.com One note timeless, came out of nowhere...