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07-18-2005, 12:58 PM
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Join Date: Jul 2005
Location: Oxford. Woo yeah. Ehem.
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Don't pass me by.
Written today about my current confusselments. Let me know what you think...?
How can I keep trying, When you never let me in? How can I start to make things right, When there's nowhere to begin? Don't pass me by, Don't pass me by, Don't let me go... How can you pretend to listen, To every word I say? How can you forget it all, The next day? Don't pass me by, Don't pass me by, Don't let me go... How can we look, Into each others eyes? How can we take, All each others lies? Don't pass me by, Don't pass me by, Don't let me go... How can I say you're mine, When you never say I'm yours? How can I say I don't need you, When I'm in love with all your flaws? Don't pass me by, Don't pass me by, Don't let me go... How can you not know, The way I feel? How can you go on, Like this isn't real? Don't pass me by, Don't pass me by, Don't let me go... How could we think, We should be apart? How could we think, We don't need each others heart? You're passing me by, You're letting me go, You're passing me by, You're letting me go. Keep me together.
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I never wanted to love you, but that's okay... I always knew that you'd leave me anyway. You're treading on awfully thin ice darling, it's so awfully thin. It's almost turning to water, as we speak. *~~#You.Are.Too.Far.Gone.^'||¬.
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07-20-2005, 03:06 PM
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Groupie
Join Date: Jul 2005
Location: Southern Oregon
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I absolutely love it..just because I'm going through the exact same thing and I can totally relate.
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07-20-2005, 10:02 PM
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Join Date: Jul 2005
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"I am societies child, this is how they made me, and now im sayin what's on my mind and they dont want that. This is what you made me America." I point one back at 'em, but not the index or pinkie, or the ring or the thumb, it's the one you put up when you don't give a ****, when you won't just put up, with the bull**** they pull, cause they full of **** too... |
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07-21-2005, 12:05 AM
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Join Date: Jul 2005
Location: **dOwN uNDAh**
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^^^awww,that's not very nice.i think it's..however you think it is.
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07-22-2005, 02:28 AM
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Music Addict
Join Date: Jul 2005
Location: Oxford. Woo yeah. Ehem.
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In what way is it sick?
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I never wanted to love you, but that's okay... I always knew that you'd leave me anyway. You're treading on awfully thin ice darling, it's so awfully thin. It's almost turning to water, as we speak. *~~#You.Are.Too.Far.Gone.^'||¬.
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07-22-2005, 01:15 PM
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Join Date: Feb 2004
Location: JMU
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You repeat the line
"Don't pass me by, Don't pass me by, Don't let me go..." far too much. It loses its power. Also, the rhyming seems trite. Don't stop writing by any means, but put some variance into it. |
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07-24-2005, 03:01 PM
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Join Date: May 2005
Location: THE PEOPLES ЯEPUBLIK ФF MAИCUИIA
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07-25-2005, 09:40 AM
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tension and release.
Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: Oakland
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no wonder people pass you by, your bleeding heart bleeds all over them.
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07-25-2005, 02:14 PM
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Music Addict
Join Date: Jul 2005
Location: Oxford. Woo yeah. Ehem.
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Erm, okay...
Thanks for your comments.
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I never wanted to love you, but that's okay... I always knew that you'd leave me anyway. You're treading on awfully thin ice darling, it's so awfully thin. It's almost turning to water, as we speak. *~~#You.Are.Too.Far.Gone.^'||¬.
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