some songs i wrote that you probably wont like but... (hardcore, screamo)

tdoc210 · 08-26-2005, 03:25 PM

LEFT
: why why why
been left by myself
execpt for one
daddys gone away
insanity
: screammm the pain
whyy why
: was it me
: who
dont call me a prat
im no a ****ing brat
stay away leave me alone all in my room
save me
save me

R.I.P YOU

i wanna rip them all to shreds
like a ****in rag doll
they are all bitches whining and tearing
im gonna wreck my life
i hate them rench them through
they por acid in my wounds
: take me away
sanity
i hid undere my shed
: wishing they were dead
just running from my feelings

tdoc210 · 08-26-2005, 04:26 PM

please post comments

tdoc210 · 08-26-2005, 04:37 PM

lost

look see theve gone away

go live by the rive
watch the fish
they are dying
as you watch the days
you realize you have to die
everything dies
school came and went
met some friends of your own
they are not cleancut
yourlifes in the garbage
stare at the ground your lost
lost
lost
lost
forever gone
keep you away
keep him away
go away
ahhhhhhhh
die die die
rest rest
in my wooden box
im as happy as anyone could be

SCREAM

ahhhhrgrgrg
i hate you
get the **** away
leave me alone
go to my room
liten to you scream
but you arnt a person
your my past i just want to ****in
SCREEEEEEEAMM
scream
i wanna die and be alone
kill me please

anticipation · 08-27-2005, 11:53 AM

that is straight up e to the mo.

tdoc210 · 08-27-2005, 02:33 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Gentleman Johnny

that is straight up e to the mo.

definitly not try post hardcore or screamo

TheBig3KilledMyRainDog · 08-27-2005, 05:22 PM

Death, words are not songs, and if you want peoples opinions, don't be so combative with them.

~~deadkennedyspunk~~ · 08-27-2005, 05:30 PM

ok but its definatley not meant to be emo

TheBig3KilledMyRainDog · 08-27-2005, 05:45 PM

dual accounts?

tdoc210 · 08-27-2005, 06:16 PM

^ no thats my friend he typed for me i was accidentley logged on to his at his house when i was viewing this sorry ill have my friend delete that

**sleepy jack** · 08-28-2005, 04:25 PM

...Hate to say it....but this is just shit. There are times when writing in sheer teen angst is just is crap.This is one of those times.

EDIT: and "daddys gone away" wtf? you tryin to sound like good charlotte?

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08-26-2005, 03:25 PM
tdoc210 ashes against the grain Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: new hampsha Posts: 2,618	some songs i wrote that you probably wont like but... LEFT : why why why been left by myself execpt for one daddys gone away insanity : screammm the pain whyy why : was it me : who dont call me a prat im no a **ing brat stay away leave me alone all in my room save me save me R.I.P YOU i wanna rip them all to shreds like a **in rag doll they are all bitches whining and tearing im gonna wreck my life i hate them rench them through they por acid in my wounds : take me away sanity i hid undere my shed : wishing they were dead just running from my feelings __________________ We went back there and they had come and hacked off every inoculated arm. There they were in a pile. A pile of little arms. And I remember... I... I... I cried. I wept like some grandmother. I wanted to tear my teeth out. I didn't know what I wanted to do. And I want to remember it. I never want to forget it. I never want to forget. And then I realized... like I was shot... like I was shot with a diamond... a diamond bullet right through my forehead. And I thought: My God... the genius of that.

08-26-2005, 04:26 PM
tdoc210 ashes against the grain Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: new hampsha Posts: 2,618	please post comments __________________ We went back there and they had come and hacked off every inoculated arm. There they were in a pile. A pile of little arms. And I remember... I... I... I cried. I wept like some grandmother. I wanted to tear my teeth out. I didn't know what I wanted to do. And I want to remember it. I never want to forget it. I never want to forget. And then I realized... like I was shot... like I was shot with a diamond... a diamond bullet right through my forehead. And I thought: My God... the genius of that.

08-26-2005, 04:37 PM
tdoc210 ashes against the grain Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: new hampsha Posts: 2,618	lost look see theve gone away go live by the rive watch the fish they are dying as you watch the days you realize you have to die everything dies school came and went met some friends of your own they are not cleancut yourlifes in the garbage stare at the ground your lost lost lost lost forever gone keep you away keep him away go away ahhhhhhhh die die die rest rest in my wooden box im as happy as anyone could be SCREAM ahhhhrgrgrg i hate you get the ** away leave me alone go to my room liten to you scream but you arnt a person your my past i just want to **in SCREEEEEEEAMM scream i wanna die and be alone kill me please __________________ We went back there and they had come and hacked off every inoculated arm. There they were in a pile. A pile of little arms. And I remember... I... I... I cried. I wept like some grandmother. I wanted to tear my teeth out. I didn't know what I wanted to do. And I want to remember it. I never want to forget it. I never want to forget. And then I realized... like I was shot... like I was shot with a diamond... a diamond bullet right through my forehead. And I thought: My God... the genius of that.

08-27-2005, 11:53 AM
anticipation 3 cheers for land & sea! Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Oakland Posts: 1,472	that is straight up e to the mo. __________________ i am above you and in you my ecstasy is in yours my joy is to see your joy

08-27-2005, 05:30 PM
~~deadkennedyspunk~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 26	ok but its definatley not meant to be emo

08-27-2005, 06:16 PM
tdoc210 ashes against the grain Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: new hampsha Posts: 2,618	^ no thats my friend he typed for me i was accidentley logged on to his at his house when i was viewing this sorry ill have my friend delete that __________________ We went back there and they had come and hacked off every inoculated arm. There they were in a pile. A pile of little arms. And I remember... I... I... I cried. I wept like some grandmother. I wanted to tear my teeth out. I didn't know what I wanted to do. And I want to remember it. I never want to forget it. I never want to forget. And then I realized... like I was shot... like I was shot with a diamond... a diamond bullet right through my forehead. And I thought: My God... the genius of that.

08-28-2005, 04:25 PM
sleepy jack thom yorke disciple Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 17,807	...Hate to say it....but this is just shit. There are times when writing in sheer teen angst is just is crap.This is one of those times. EDIT: and "daddys gone away" wtf? you tryin to sound like good charlotte? __________________ I sit in my house for days on end and stare at the roses in the closet.