Hey, I've Got A Rap For You (bling bling)

PaperHurricanesAndPlanes · 03-18-2007, 07:01 PM

I’ve Got A Rap For You

So you know how ya niggas bleed?
You know they suffer?
And yet you’re bouncing in your limo hummer,
Talkin’ about bling bling and killing.

Shove that bling right up your ass.
It was found by slaves,
Black slaves to the white diamond trade.

Acting like you’re a symbol
Of your race and how they’ll prosper
Well, “fiddy,” if you are,
Than the Blacks are pretty ****ed.

Acting like you’re the man,
Because you spit words about “hunnies”
And poppin’ some caps. **** you, violence isn’t cool.

**sleepy jack** · 03-21-2007, 03:21 AM

stfu whitey

Frances · 03-21-2007, 04:14 AM

wow, that's really bad. (not the good kind)

DontRunMeOver · 03-21-2007, 04:18 AM

If violence isn't cool, how do you explain the whole Kung Fu industry? That's hella cool.

Alo · 03-21-2007, 04:47 AM

You're right about what you 'rap', and I sort of like the first two verses. Nice and sarcastic to use such a rap to get that kind of message across. The second two verses are just a bit overdone.

Acting like you’re a symbol
Of your race and how they’ll prosper
Well, “fiddy,” if you are,
(I don't get this part really...)

Than the Blacks are pretty ****ed.
(You just ruin any chance of anyone taking you seriously if you say this...)

Acting like you’re the man,
Because you spit words about “hunnies”
(this part is ok)

And poppin’ some caps.
**** you, violence isn’t cool.
(Abrupt end, and you say violence isn't cool as a statement, which should have been a follow up on a few arguments...)

bobinatcat · 03-21-2007, 07:21 AM

def. interesting idea there. very true in my mind.

littleknowitall · 03-21-2007, 04:30 PM

right idea, wrong way about it, just like hitler

littleknowitall · 03-21-2007, 04:31 PM

just needs a little re-writing, wrong way about it.

figure8 · 03-21-2007, 04:33 PM

lovely.

littleknowitall · 03-21-2007, 05:07 PM

really? o.0

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03-18-2007, 07:01 PM
PaperHurricanesAndPlanes Bad motherfücker Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: In The Realms of Poetry Posts: 520	Hey, I've Got A Rap For You I’ve Got A Rap For You So you know how ya niggas bleed? You know they suffer? And yet you’re bouncing in your limo hummer, Talkin’ about bling bling and killing. Shove that bling right up your ass. It was found by slaves, Black slaves to the white diamond trade. Acting like you’re a symbol Of your race and how they’ll prosper Well, “fiddy,” if you are, Than the Blacks are pretty **ed. Acting like you’re the man, Because you spit words about “hunnies” And poppin’ some caps. you, violence isn’t cool. __________________ Say what again motherfucker, I double dare you, say what one mo' goddamned time!**

03-21-2007, 03:21 AM
sleepy jack Bone Machine Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Jesusland Posts: 17,206	stfu whitey __________________ You're so evil and I'm so good, I'll make it up to you someday.

03-21-2007, 04:47 AM
Alo Scarf Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 717	You're right about what you 'rap', and I sort of like the first two verses. Nice and sarcastic to use such a rap to get that kind of message across. The second two verses are just a bit overdone. Acting like you’re a symbol Of your race and how they’ll prosper Well, “fiddy,” if you are, (I don't get this part really...) Than the Blacks are pretty ed. (You just ruin any chance of anyone taking you seriously if you say this...) Acting like you’re the man, Because you spit words about “hunnies” (this part is ok) And poppin’ some caps. **** you, violence isn’t cool. (Abrupt end, and you say violence isn't cool as a statement, which should have been a follow up on a few arguments...) __________________ I rocked my shoelaces untied

03-21-2007, 07:21 AM
bobinatcat spak-tenguin Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Perth, Australia Posts: 71	def. interesting idea there. very true in my mind. __________________ recently listened to: http://imagegen.last.fm/tracks/recen...bobinatcat.gif

03-21-2007, 04:30 PM
littleknowitall Last of the Musicologists Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: swansea, wales, uk Posts: 1,478	right idea, wrong way about it, just like hitler __________________ My Myspace. My Bands Myspace - Please Show Some Love Here. My Youtube. My Ultimate Guitar.

03-21-2007, 04:31 PM
littleknowitall Last of the Musicologists Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: swansea, wales, uk Posts: 1,478	just needs a little re-writing, wrong way about it. __________________ My Myspace. My Bands Myspace - Please Show Some Love Here. My Youtube. My Ultimate Guitar.

03-21-2007, 04:33 PM
figure8 Music Addict Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Canada Posts: 51	lovely.

03-21-2007, 05:07 PM
littleknowitall Last of the Musicologists Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: swansea, wales, uk Posts: 1,478	really? o.0 __________________ My Myspace. My Bands Myspace - Please Show Some Love Here. My Youtube. My Ultimate Guitar.