Birds Always Fly South No Matter How Pretty They Sing

sleepy jack · 03-26-2007, 11:07 PM

Birds Always Fly South No Matter How Pretty They Sing.

You're just like the silhouette dying as the sun sets
You slowly stretch your arms and let go of me,
And your feelings remain opaque despite the question
I don't know why I expected love to bloom in your eyes,
Tell me, did the seeds we laid those months ago ever grow?
No, I don't think so.

And I must confess i'm at a loss for words as I wait for it to come out,
"Oh hes just some guy i've seen around - don't worry"
I sit mystified and perplexed at what you say,
I use to believe every word you spoke but i'm afraid,
You've become a liar to me and its really hard
To place my trust in you when I know who loves who.

And it looks like i've loved a lie again, listening to the whisper
Of your words floating around in my head and all those midnight talks,
They never really meant much to you did they? just a way to kill time,
While I tell you how much I care, but now i'm tracing onto a paper,
And I was once told hearts don't break they only bend,
But it can only bend so far before it snaps again,
And all those things you tried to cure,
They've come back and my visions becoming more blurred,
Who ever believed I was a strong person anyway?
Looking at dead eyes and then washing them in hopes,
To make my vision clean, but I still can't see why.

And when you said I was your favorite person in the world,
I believed you and I guess thats why this hurts.

**LesPaul43** · 03-26-2007, 11:09 PM

Its good..i can tell you felt this one/

sleepy jack · 03-28-2007, 02:58 AM

bump

fgtz

Kyren Tsunami · 03-29-2007, 12:40 AM

good indeed,, why don't you add some sentences for the last part because if it were to be sung, it feel like the music fall off the cliff, not walking down the hill if you know what i mean.

sleepy jack · 03-29-2007, 01:32 AM

I completely get what you mean, umm, I don't know what to put right now i'll think about it though.

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03-26-2007, 11:09 PM
LesPaul43 Bring da Ruckus Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: British Columbia Posts: 3,806	Its good..i can tell you felt this one/ __________________ I bomb atomically, Socrates' philosophies and hypotheses can't define how I be droppin these mockeries, lyrically perform armed robbery Flee with the lottery, possibly they spotted me Battle-scarred shogun, explosion when my pen hits Tremendous. When Life Gives You Lemons, You Paint That Shit Gold

03-29-2007, 12:40 AM
Kyren Tsunami Music Addict Join Date: Feb 2006 Posts: 65	good indeed,, why don't you add some sentences for the last part because if it were to be sung, it feel like the music fall off the cliff, not walking down the hill if you know what i mean. __________________ all the songs I've Wrotes cames from experiences from the past, present and future. Last edited by Kyren Tsunami : 03-29-2007 at 12:46 AM.