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Old 07-12-2013, 06:52 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Anti-social Living
People call me useless people call me strange.
I like to think of myself being an ABSTRACT painting
Silver bullets , making deep holes in my soul.
i locked my self away, being far from the anticipation of the word ‘normal
Somewhere dark i thought
Someplace cold
Where i could be alone in the darkness
Call it weird , i call it antisocial living.
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Old 07-12-2013, 07:00 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Anti-social Living
People call me useless people call me strange.
I like to think of myself being an ABSTRACT painting
Silver bullets , making deep holes in my soul.
i locked my self away, being far from the anticipation of the word ‘normal
Somewhere dark i thought
Someplace cold
Where i could be alone in the darkness
Call it weird , i call it antisocial living.

hmmm its a little abstract and strange. just kind weird.
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Old 07-15-2013, 05:29 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Why have you posted in the soundtracks sub-forum???
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Old 07-15-2013, 05:39 PM   #4 (permalink)
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I'm wondering the same as Trollheart.

But I also read the lyrics and honestly, they're a little mediocre. I don't know where you drew inspiration from or how passionate you are about it, man, so that's just constructive criticism. I just think it sounded more like poetry than lyrics.
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I feel that people have executed this type of thing before with much more substance and originality.
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Old 08-07-2013, 09:55 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Why have you posted in the soundtracks sub-forum???
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