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04-07-2008, 08:49 AM
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Groupie
Join Date: Apr 2008
Posts: 6
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New orginal song i want yall to hear
I wrote this song after i caught my ex-wife in bed with another man. I think all people who had a realtionship go bad could relate. It is recorded live so the vedio just has the lyrics with a couple of pics in it. What yall think??
look on youtube for " rcstyx the songs name is cry " Last edited by shawn pierce : 04-08-2008 at 09:29 AM. |
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04-07-2008, 08:52 AM
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Groupie
Join Date: Apr 2008
Posts: 6
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I can upload the url for it since i am new here but maybe someone else can make the link?
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04-07-2008, 01:20 PM
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n/a
Join Date: May 2007
Posts: 949
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Reminds me of Phil Collins.
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04-07-2008, 02:59 PM
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Music Addict
Join Date: Mar 2008
Location: everywhere
Posts: 638
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i'm hoping the upload date of april 1st is indicative of this song's true intentions. otherwise what's the real point? to prove you're over her by singing about her for 4 minutes longer than necessary?
you should also get someone to proofread your lyrics. i took for granted that you be around - you should be you'd i thought your feet was planted on the ground - feet is plural, was is singular, should be were everybody has their mistakes that they make - so she was predestined to sleep around? the mistake already existed it only had to play itself out? |
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04-07-2008, 03:35 PM
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Groupie
Join Date: Apr 2008
Posts: 6
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At the time when i wrote this 4 years ago i really didn't care how it was spelled. anywho, its not about her now its about the song and having someone like hinder sing it or remake it. i just wanted to share this with yall.
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04-07-2008, 03:36 PM
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Groupie
Join Date: Apr 2008
Posts: 6
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oh and the mistake part was she was like im sorry please forgive me. i don't think so......
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04-07-2008, 03:37 PM
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Music Addict
Join Date: Mar 2008
Location: everywhere
Posts: 638
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4 years later and you're still trying to promote a song about an ex... yeah you're DEFINITELY over her....
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04-07-2008, 03:38 PM
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Has Cool Points In Droves
Join Date: Dec 2004
Location: Somewhere cooler than you
Posts: 10,519
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And I thought you said it was NEW
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04-07-2008, 05:35 PM
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I'm better than you
Join Date: Jan 2008
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False advertising
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04-07-2008, 09:43 PM
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Music Rapist
Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: Somewhere in the U.S
Posts: 406
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welll i got all the way to the second line.. then i vomited, so i skipped to half way through... then had explosive diarrhea
hey, at least its causing a significant effect the high *ting* the drums are playing is annoying the guitar is bland and boring the voice is nails on a chalk board
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