stuck (lyrics, Kiss, Religious, titles, quote)

deep_and_depressing · 12-30-2008, 03:16 PM

Okay sooo... I've written 5 songs for my up and coming band & I seriously can't edit to save my life! The titles are: Not the One, Rainbows at Midnight, Serenity, Saw You in a Dream, and When it all Ends. If any sound interesting, tell me which one you'd like to help with and I'll post the lyrics for you. I really need help, I've been trying to kick off this band for 8 years now so any help is appreciated.

Wifey Boozer · 12-30-2008, 05:00 PM

You could start by changing your username to something less... less.

Rainbows at Midnight sounds mildy interesting. Let's see.

deep_and_depressing · 01-01-2009, 12:51 PM

Rainbows at Midnight
The clock says twelve A.M and I'm at my window again
challenging the velvet sky
laying back down so hard I try
to get some sleep in tonight

[chorus]
I can't sleep
'cause I keep thinking
why can't I start dreaming
my mind is running 'round
and it's cold outside
and I can't calm down
my imagination is creating
rainbows at midnight

returning to the sill
I guess I have some time to kill
[I know I need something else here but I don't know what to do]

[chorus]

if I could sleep
maybe I could keep
my sanity
as I lay in bed tonight
I toss and turn hoping that I might
close my eyes

[chorus]
I can't sleep 'cause I keep thinking
why can't I start dreaming about
the things I want to find
how do I ease my mind.

I don't wanna change my user name, that's just who I am

deep_and_depressing · 01-02-2009, 01:19 PM

I am a blackened soul,
I have been stained,
all has been lost and nothing gained

I am an outcast
yet to be found
I stand still while the world goes 'round

Thoughts of suicide visit every day
but somehow I manage to push them away

I would express these feelings to people I know
but these thoughts they are my own
a work of art
deep and depressing
I don't understand why people
keep messing
with my emotions

I try so hard not to be outspoken
but alas the silence is broken
who I am and how I feel
these words are coaxed
out of me

the pain experienced when I
express
makes my life a total
mess

I wish people would understand
I wish they didn't care
though I'm used to the snickering
and the stares
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I wrote this at a New Year's Eve party (some new year huh?) this is what I do when I'm depressed. What do you think? I always look for feedback on my depression. ;P

WWWP · 01-02-2009, 03:48 PM

Jeeze. Who peed in your cheerios?

deep_and_depressing · 01-03-2009, 01:50 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by wolverinewolfweiselpigeon

Jeeze. Who peed in your cheerios?

idk - I'm bi & most of my family is too religious to accept my sexuality, I kissed my best friend & now she hates me, I have done a lot of **** just to make myself feel remotely liked by other people, & my dad makes me feel like a total failure at everything, plus i'm in love with someone i'll probably never have a chance with- I guess everyone

Arya Stark · 01-03-2009, 03:20 PM

>.> That sounds like my family.

Except it has nothing to do with religion.

They just want me to be straight and I don't have a sexuality.

You just have to be yourself.

I'm sorry you feel so lost.

People are always going to mess with you.

It's the way they are.

I don't really know why.

sleepy jack · 01-03-2009, 05:22 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by deep_and_depressing

idk - I'm bi & most of my family is too religious to accept my sexuality, I kissed my best friend & now she hates me, I have done a lot of **** just to make myself feel remotely liked by other people, & my dad makes me feel like a total failure at everything, plus i'm in love with someone i'll probably never have a chance with- I guess everyone

so u kissed a girl and you liked it lol?

Arya Stark · 01-03-2009, 05:23 PM

Comparing through experience, girls are better kissers than guys anyway.

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deep_and_depressing · 01-04-2009, 12:06 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sleepy jack

so u kissed a girl and you liked it lol?

no it was akward as hell she didn't kiss me back

12-30-2008, 03:16 PM	#1 (permalink)
deep_and_depressing Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2008 Posts: 73	stuck Okay sooo... I've written 5 songs for my up and coming band & I seriously can't edit to save my life! The titles are: Not the One, Rainbows at Midnight, Serenity, Saw You in a Dream, and When it all Ends. If any sound interesting, tell me which one you'd like to help with and I'll post the lyrics for you. I really need help, I've been trying to kick off this band for 8 years now so any help is appreciated. __________________ My life was like a fairytale . . . Except I left Mr. Charming for his sister Last edited by deep_and_depressing; 12-30-2008 at 03:20 PM. Reason: wrong #

12-30-2008, 05:00 PM	#2 (permalink)
Wifey Boozer Meanie McFeany Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Troy side'ah the dirt, NY Posts: 455	You could start by changing your username to something less... less. Rainbows at Midnight sounds mildy interesting. Let's see. __________________ ... Stalin had a *FANTASTIC* moustache. Formerly known as the Prime Minister of Spain. [backintheubbr]

01-01-2009, 12:51 PM	#3 (permalink)
deep_and_depressing Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2008 Posts: 73	Rainbows at Midnight The clock says twelve A.M and I'm at my window again challenging the velvet sky laying back down so hard I try to get some sleep in tonight [chorus] I can't sleep 'cause I keep thinking why can't I start dreaming my mind is running 'round and it's cold outside and I can't calm down my imagination is creating rainbows at midnight returning to the sill I guess I have some time to kill [I know I need something else here but I don't know what to do] [chorus] if I could sleep maybe I could keep my sanity as I lay in bed tonight I toss and turn hoping that I might close my eyes [chorus] I can't sleep 'cause I keep thinking why can't I start dreaming about the things I want to find how do I ease my mind. I don't wanna change my user name, that's just who I am __________________ My life was like a fairytale . . . Except I left Mr. Charming for his sister

01-02-2009, 01:19 PM	#4 (permalink)
deep_and_depressing Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2008 Posts: 73	Deep and Depressing I am a blackened soul, I have been stained, all has been lost and nothing gained I am an outcast yet to be found I stand still while the world goes 'round Thoughts of suicide visit every day but somehow I manage to push them away I would express these feelings to people I know but these thoughts they are my own a work of art deep and depressing I don't understand why people keep messing with my emotions I try so hard not to be outspoken but alas the silence is broken who I am and how I feel these words are coaxed out of me the pain experienced when I express makes my life a total mess I wish people would understand I wish they didn't care though I'm used to the snickering and the stares ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I wrote this at a New Year's Eve party (some new year huh?) this is what I do when I'm depressed. What do you think? I always look for feedback on my depression. ;P __________________ My life was like a fairytale . . . Except I left Mr. Charming for his sister

01-03-2009, 03:20 PM	#7 (permalink)
Arya Stark "Hermione-Lite" Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: New York. Posts: 3,084	>.> That sounds like my family. Except it has nothing to do with religion. They just want me to be straight and I don't have a sexuality. You just have to be yourself. I'm sorry you feel so lost. People are always going to mess with you. It's the way they are. I don't really know why.

01-03-2009, 05:23 PM	#9 (permalink)
Arya Stark "Hermione-Lite" Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: New York. Posts: 3,084	Comparing through experience, girls are better kissers than guys anyway. [=